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dingusjr
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0 posted 2003-09-29 11:41 AM


A rabbit hops and stops and looks around
remembering each chase through
stubble rows of winter wheat.

Soaking up the sunshine and the stillness
near the peaceful pasture pond,
it scratches with a lucky foot and sleeps.

With a little lettuce laugh the rabbit dreams
of fat and lazy dogs too tired to run.

(response to Dog In The Sun
by Ed Ratledge)

[This message has been edited by dingusjr (09-29-2003 11:07 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-09-29 11:42 AM


What fun this is, for several reasons...
sunshine
pasture ponds
and reminding me about lazy dogs and typing classes....

thank you!

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-09-29 12:23 PM


pretty cool

enjoyed this

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3 posted 2003-09-29 10:17 PM


Thank you, LW! You make my day.....

Think I repost that poem so this beauty is around here with it.

Ah, found it! /pip/Forum82/HTML/000610.html



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Martie
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4 posted 2003-09-29 11:04 PM


Larry...wonderful to read...thank you!
suthern
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5 posted 2003-09-30 01:24 PM


ROFL... Turnabout is definitely fair! *S* I enjoyed this very much!
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