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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2003-09-29 09:34 AM


Name The Ride


You are in line holding your breath
You look up, you are scared to death
You hear screams of deadly fright
You will hear those screams all through the night
You see colors of red and green
You think you’ll throw up in the latrine
You are now the first in line
You are ready to pay your dime
You are to short for this scary ride
You are embarrassed you want to hide
You grab your bike and head on home
You walk in the door and grab the phone
Did you go on “The Ride?”
Yeah! I wasn’t scared.

Love Bon-Bon


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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-09-29 09:38 AM


Bonnie  
It's all in the mind. Enjoyed

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
2 posted 2003-09-29 09:44 AM


wow what ride it was!!!!!!


ya" expressed this well,,,,

                                                            

dingusjr
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since 2003-09-24
Posts 415
Missouri
3 posted 2003-09-29 09:45 AM


How 'bout first in line as a kid for
shots cause your first name begins with A
Nice poem.......Larry

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