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Dichotomy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Dichotomy Alas poor human I knew him well The flesh is torn but his smart does dwell His sew has left an impasse deed And now we suffer with his seed. He’s fouled the air the land the sea And fouled the life was left for me He’s eaten the apple in his goal And even fouled his very soul But somewhere in the abyss Lies a micro speck of bliss And this is where I search the core To fan the light to bright once more He is a true dichotomy A muse of two polarities And will if given time enough Reverse the polls and change the stuff. It’s here I try to stanch the rend Perhaps we can a better end |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sometimes I think all there is left to do is write a better ending.  (and at first I thought this was about someone I knew--but then I realized you were talking about a HUMAN.  )*heart hugs* sy... and g'mornin'! lub ya! muah. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Alas poor human I knew him well The flesh is torn but his smart does dwell His sew has left an impasse deed And now we suffer with his seed. =================================== You are the poster poet for the enviroment Sy-babes...I do so admire your rhyme scheme stream of conscious ... Mother Nature smiles at your rhymes divine...she sings them as a lullaby to Father Time.  *ww*    "If you feel heartbreak, distant thunder, lightning, earthquakes ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity LOL, You are the funny in my bones. JM, And you are the love of my dreams. WWRS |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Geminis are good... dichotomous to the core... and working for a better day, dear Sy... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"It’s here I try to stanch the rend Perhaps we can a better end" ~ Aye, captain. If ye be at the helm, a better end shall be written on this sea of blue!  Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling man I’m so rarely in the forums these days, or if I am, I’m in and out again very quickly. Still I had to stop by and read and reply to your wonderful poem, as always its excellent darling man, I love it utterly, utterly, utterly. You really are a fine writer and this is exceptionally good, wonderful. Love and warm stuff Big hugs Mushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed the penning n read,,,, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Good Morning Sy...I agree mankind can be both the problem and the solution...the question is which choice will be made.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
SY: nice polarity within this bi- polarization *smile* miss you xxoo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm STILL picking up after people... I can only hope that someday my actions are multiplied... Good morning, Sy-guy... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel An if, that can't be satisfied by one. Marsha Hello sweety how are you doing. QjQ Once again thank you my friend. scorpio, The right one I hope. LOL littlewing, Thank you and miss you too. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Just keep shining. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great write Sy! Chilly here...have a spot of tea with me? ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, My pleasure, |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sy, you always make me feel better when I read one of your pieces. Hugs sweet man, Marti Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marti, And you make me feel better when I read your replies. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Seymour, this is so very touching, dearest friend, I fear that in the future, when mankind has finally ravaged this planet and see the ugliness around them, they regret all they did and there's nothing they can do about it (sad sigh) I pray it isn't too late, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, It is my hope too. |
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