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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-29 06:10 AM

Could You Learn Me?

I am afraid
of the dark
did I
ever tell
you that
my eyes
don’t seem
to adjust well
and I need
to reach
and find
someone there

"wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-09-29 06:20 AM

very nice..I grew accustomed to the dark...although it took some time.

M

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

2 posted 2003-09-29 07:33 AM

Well said.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-09-29 08:25 AM

oh my,,

this kinda reminds me of a song i once heard should the teacher stand so near,,teach me tonight,,

[This message has been edited by QjQ (09-29-2003 08:33 AM).]

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-09-29 09:49 AM

I know it well. And the brighter, stronger your day, the darker the night seems.

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alisa
Member

since 2003-08-20

Posts 70
Florida

5 posted 2003-09-29 10:01 AM

you will find someone there....

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2003-09-29 10:05 AM

I am scared of the dark as well...

Love this..

Susan

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

7 posted 2003-09-29 06:26 PM

WOW..swallowed hard when I read this. That's twice in the last 5 mins. that's happened to me...wow what is it with these ones that choke me up?..I don't have a hanky, anyone with a tissue? Feels so sad to read this. :'(
Love,
Shara~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-09-29 07:27 PM

nice read

Darren
Junior Member

since 2003-09-30

Posts 30

9 posted 2003-09-30 07:12 AM

I would love to learn you
and help you to see
through the veil of the darkness
when night falls on thee

But you needn't search the blackness
to find your beacon there
for the light is within you
and you surely shine there

You're a gifted poet Helen with a warm heart.

[This message has been edited by Darren (09-30-2003 08:20 AM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2003-09-30 07:17 AM

Helen, will a cyber hug do for today?

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

11 posted 2003-10-01 03:30 PM

This is...powerful, to me..

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

12 posted 2003-10-01 04:28 PM

It’s never truly dark, when your being embraced...

Enlightening Helen!

Much Enjoyed!

Richy

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

13 posted 2003-10-01 10:44 PM

I'm afraid of the dark too, but the mere absence of light holds no terror at all, not for either of us.

~~J

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

14 posted 2003-10-01 11:33 PM

(big hugggsssssss) I too hate the darkness and I send many angel hugs your way, sweet friend, I believe it is important to be acquainted with the night yet not get absorbed in it, as life is for living and not studying profusely! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is powerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

15 posted 2003-10-01 11:34 PM

You will soon have someone within your grasp who is worthy of your love.

Crystal

ECL
New Member

since 2003-10-02

Posts 7

16 posted 2003-10-02 01:18 AM

I like reading it, it seems to flow very well. The need to know someone is there without seeing them is a strong emotion.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

17 posted 2003-10-02 02:06 AM

beautiful

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

18 posted 2003-10-02 02:09 AM

So beautifully said, Helen...

I know this one...

Hugs to you, my friend...
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

19 posted 2003-10-02 04:07 AM

in a heartbeat!!! thanks for asking ;-} beautifully written

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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