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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-09-29 12:18 PM


Your old
rotary
phone
has taught me
how to balance
plates
upon  my
fingers..

Your
tears are worthy
of a dry
and curvy
hand
and..
I want to
dry them
as
if
they were my
own.



© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2003-09-29 12:20 PM


Beautiful Meg!

Susan

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2 posted 2003-09-29 12:22 PM


terrific,,,,

                                                            

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3 posted 2003-09-29 05:25 PM


pulse-pulse-pulse-pulse-pulse-pulse-pulse *shoof* pulse-pulse-pulse ...
Dark Angel
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4 posted 2003-09-29 05:26 PM


Fantastic!

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


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5 posted 2003-09-29 05:55 PM


...oh wait..forgot how to cry. damn...came close though

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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6 posted 2003-09-30 11:43 AM


Your
tears are worthy
of a dry
and curvy
hand
and..
I want to
dry them
as
if
they were my
own.


both tender and sensual...


nicely done

LeeJ
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7 posted 2003-09-30 11:46 AM


incredibly written, thank you for sharing
Aenimal
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8 posted 2003-09-30 04:05 PM


awesome, some get the defibrillator the squirrels having problems again
wordwizard
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9 posted 2003-09-30 09:31 PM


very picturesque



[This message has been edited by wordwizard (10-02-2003 12:57 AM).]

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10 posted 2003-10-01 02:10 AM




(big hugggssssssss) And I can just imagine cupping my hand and find my face drowning in an oasis of tears that feel just like anothers! (sigh) I send angel comfort hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Meghan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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