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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-09-29 12:14 PM

Oh, you..

You I'd forgotten about.

The things you've owed me,
I have
let slip my mind.

I suppose it's the same
on your end..
You've brought out your
cards again..

But you,
have you found what you've been searching for?
The warmth of a body on
sunday morning, kissing your eyelids
as you sleep?
Have you found this true love as
it's found me?

It's funny how, time progresses in
an even, scenic, "in limbo" drive.
That no longer do I care for my material
belongings as I have found
a reason to breathe.

I apologize, again, for existing at all..
My mind will stumble along the way as
it has done for an eternity, already.

I feel sorry
for ever letting myself hold such a place
in your pre-battered heart..
You've treated me all the same..
And such is life, a habitual need to pass along
the hurt we've felt in the past.

Such
is
life
to want
another
horribly written
chapter
in this
drawl of a book.

So
you never speak to me anymore.. though
you know
I'm here.
And I assume, that you suppose,
I'm angry at that.
Tis not my fault, you are mostly incorrect,
that I've got a hurricane
of un-need for you..
For in his
bed I've slept..more soundly,
and comfortably..
than your stretch of highway bones
could ever pillow..

Acessing a molten sky, you

you will find out soon..

that moving on, that's
what I do..
since I left you.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2003-09-29 12:21 PM

you...are my tears...i cry...h

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-09-29 12:21 PM

good expressions presented,,,

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2003-09-29 12:24 PM

"I feel sorry
for ever letting myself hold such a place
in your pre-battered heart..
You've treated me all the same..
And such is life, a habitual need to pass along
the hurt we've felt in the past."

You continue to amaze me!

Susan

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2003-09-29 05:27 PM

God yes.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

5 posted 2003-09-29 05:51 PM

uuhhh....she's killing me too

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-09-30 12:29 PM

moving on...yeah

you know I can relate too well to this

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2003-09-30 01:22 PM

Your words blend the understanding of the feelings once there, now, denied, and the vitriolic taste of swallowing once more the thoughts..

not bitter in your presentation exactly, but caustic in the scrape fo the time against now and abraded in the terms you use to describe..

a tender moment of kissing eyelids
says it all as to what is gone...

you write exceedingly well... and far above the talent levels of most, myself included...

always a pleasure to read you... and as I have told Gemma... good thing I am an old fart, or you two would drive me nuts...
wanting more.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-09-30 04:08 PM

oh this aches but beautifully so

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-09-30 05:46 PM

liked this much

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

10 posted 2003-09-30 07:32 PM

ah my queen you did it again

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2003-09-30 07:46 PM

What else can you do...and eloquently...James

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2003-10-01 02:59 AM

(big hugggsssssss) And wen the skies are molten, nothing has really disappeared, just changed and when change is imminent, so is motion and accepting it is one big step to finding that something in return! (sigh) You write with pure heart, sweet friend, I really admire your ponderings, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Meghan, than you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

13 posted 2003-10-01 07:16 AM

Whoooooooooooooooooooo yeah!

oh this bites on the heels, aches bones, and also gives new life to me.

I adore your writes.

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