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ironyx
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0 posted 2003-09-28 11:18 PM



I felt you through me
a picture of pleasure
please be sure
I am
punctured dreams
tipped towards me
with little (pin)pricks
though
I don't bleed
do you?
we cast no shadows
in my dream
reflections (refractions)
maybe...
I try to shatter
rosed colors
and dually
try to believe



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1 posted 2003-09-28 11:34 PM



I try to change rosey colours too, but so far it has not worked!  Welcome to Passions I know you will enjoy the forums and poets here.

      Carpe' Diem
The Canuck, Sharon  

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2 posted 2003-09-28 11:41 PM


welcome to passions
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3 posted 2003-09-29 12:44 PM


You have a future here....easy to see that!

Welcome aboard!

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4 posted 2003-09-29 12:54 PM


great poem
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5 posted 2003-09-29 03:34 AM




(sigh) In my mind, those colors can never cease, but we can blend the other colors with it and it only makes believing ever more special! This is a fabulous debut, sweet friend, imagine the many amazing pastels of poetry you'll use here, I love this! Welcome to Passions, sweet Ironyx, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ironyx, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Kethry
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6 posted 2003-09-29 03:40 AM


I too fight that rosed hue, Welcome to Passions
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-09-29 04:46 AM


awesome first post!

welcome

hope to read more!

KoKo
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8 posted 2003-09-29 05:23 AM


Cool debut...welcome to pip ^_~
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9 posted 2003-09-29 10:15 AM


I wipe the glasses daily, but for some reason, still see a rosey hue most days, even in fractured light.

Welcome! I enjoyed your imagery and the thoughts you so aptly painted upon this blue canvas. Looking forward to more from your brushes.

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10 posted 2003-09-29 10:17 AM



Welcome to Passions!
I'm looking forward
to reading more of your poetry...

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Enchantress
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11 posted 2003-09-29 10:20 AM


Welcome to Passions!
Enjoyed your first post...
I look forward to reading more.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

ironyx
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12 posted 2003-09-29 07:50 PM


thanks everyone, I never expected such a overwhelming response, I look forward to sharing and reading all of your thoughts and emotions as well!

Thanks again

Va.

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in the shadows
13 posted 2003-09-30 07:02 AM


Great impressions.  Welcome to PiP.
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