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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-09-28 09:33 PM



Keep Talking = Writing (Pink Floyd)

For such a long time
Your words were suppressed
Concealing from the world
The talent that you posses

But you broke the bond
Releasing your mind and pen
Now your words are being read
By someone other than you

Your imagination and your thoughts
On paper for anyone to read
That is the way it should be
Just be sure you Keep Writing

© Copyright 2003 Amature2 - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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1 posted 2003-09-28 09:36 PM


*wink* not a prob...smiling at...you...h
Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-09-28 09:39 PM


I only know my songs,
knowing the whole world
knows other songs...
this must be
one of them.

Thank you, Sir...

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2003-09-28 10:11 PM


Amature2 - keep those words coming and keep writing...

BC

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4 posted 2003-09-28 10:20 PM


Amature, I like this. And you
keep writing, too!!
Hugs  
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-09-28 11:02 PM


Great musical choice,
and a wonderful write..well met, sir.

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6 posted 2003-09-28 11:39 PM


Amature,
beautiful tribute and beautiful writing
challenge well met

. . . all that you are . .  and all that you see . . .

now you have me going on about Floyd
*smile*
xxoo

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7 posted 2003-09-29 12:43 PM






(big hugggsssssss) A handful of Pink Floyd songs ("Welcome To The Machine", "Another Brick In The Wall Part II", "Money", "Wish You Were Here") are among my all-time favorites and I have deep admiration for this song also, as it seems to have more of an upbeat spirit somehow and really demolishes that wall down for every aspiring writer! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, keep talking, my dear friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

SharaRose
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8 posted 2003-09-29 02:44 AM


Me loves Pink...((((Pink))))) Hey You, Yes Mr. Floyd. Come in and fix this brick in my wall!! Then when you are done tell the teacher leave me ALONE! Don't need more lessons taught!

Shara~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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9 posted 2003-09-29 08:37 PM


Who needs Roger Waters when one has Amature????
This is indeed one that does the written word justice.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

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10 posted 2003-09-29 08:42 PM


the lunatic is in my head...

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

Amature2
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11 posted 2003-09-29 10:58 PM


Thank You all for your comments and replies. And a special Thanks to Kaoru for the Challenge.
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