With thanks to the one who hurt me most

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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-09-28 07:03 PM

He could not have taught me as much
had he been
a wise old chap
than
fresh faced beautiful boy
yet to be man
that he is

Is it wrong of me
though
to want to strip him of all credit
name unmentioned
forgotten
Am I wrong
when he never did right
by me?

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-09-28 07:08 PM

I'd give him credit for inspireing all these little treats. nothing more.

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

2 posted 2003-09-28 07:31 PM

merci beaucoup windetta.

I bet he'd die if he ever read all he'd inspired. hopefully out of shame. (not literally)

i'm sat here laughing. and i'm not sure why, but its fun! i think its the liv bugs thread.

ho hum and a bottle of rum.

~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2003-09-28 09:11 PM

It's poetic justice. He didn't give you what you deserve, but you're giving him what he deserves.... Yeah, that works.

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-09-28 09:27 PM

Well dayuuum, sigh me a river would you!!
Life goes on but not in the same way, eh?

gemma, gemma, 'tis a sad one~

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2003-09-28 10:25 PM

gemjop - no, you're not wrong in my opinion, strong well written write...

BC

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-09-28 11:27 PM

Gem -

I can understand this, totally...

library

Ringo

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since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

7 posted 2003-09-29 12:05 PM

Gemma, dear, you have spoken well for a few of us on here. It is totally his loss, and hopefully he'll realize that and see his error after you have traded up.
Great job.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

8 posted 2003-09-29 12:56 PM

I agree with Wind. If it werent' for a certain someone I wouldent of been as creative.

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

9 posted 2003-09-29 01:05 AM

Inspiration at it's greatest can be taken from the soul experience of pain, and no...you are not wrong, my friend, but know that there will be inspiration from happiness to balance it out...excellent write...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

10 posted 2003-09-29 02:06 AM

greater passion = greater loss = greater grief = greater joy in the end, hopefully. unless like me you try the same over and ... ;-}

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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