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0 posted 09-28-2003 06:18 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Wind

  
(if it doesn't work then oh well)

no definite reason,
need for
label,
I feel a landslide coming on.

stick figures
running from
isolation,

infinite answers
but only one question

double sized,
turning black
with eclipse of time-
trouble finding
what they’ll never see.


And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool


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© Copyright 2003 Liz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-28-2003 06:26 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

Well Goob, if it was supposed to be a small red X in a white box...then it worked!!!  
(I'm not reading your poem till you take a yellow kitten)
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2 posted 09-28-2003 06:28 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

yeah..it works either way. the picture was an x in a big black circle so..yep..no huge difference

and you already did dunc

were did goober come from? do you just enjoy makeing these names?

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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3 posted 09-28-2003 06:34 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

Originally Mayberry, I think.     
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4 posted 09-28-2003 06:36 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

stick figures
running from
isolation


OOOOH i adore that bit!

how comes i can see things when you can't?

i cant see my panther. its a conspiracy!
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5 posted 09-28-2003 06:38 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

see dunc? GEM sees planet X. she has supervision (or she needs it )

and um...yes you are paraniod. I think I am finaly getting to you.

then you begin to make it better....you've got me in a beatles mood


And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool


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Wee...this is so great
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Well, little lady, I coul;dn't get it to work either, so I deleted it....
I'm talking about the  X. Anyway, I liked your poem, Liz.  
Hugs  
Ethel


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I had no idea
that planet x
was white and square.
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Planet Y?

infinite answers
but only one question


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it is now

used to look like the album thingie but a big black circle with question marks and running stick figures..heh


And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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Oh yeah, there's a backwards question mark, and lots of question marks around the planet. That's pretty cool, Wind. You did that yourself? If so, you're designing every cover for the Liv Bugs, in perpetua.
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yep

I like to draw disturbing things. like people turning into trees and...other things

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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Question: Do you have yahoo messenger?
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nope..just aol

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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Well, I've got aol too, through earthlink. If you want to add me to your buddy list, I'm blksqul at earthlink dot net. I forget what my name is, possibly blksqul. Just search via e-mail.

Warning: I am seldom on. But whenever I am on, it's fun. At least, I think so.

.m.
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heh...I tend to ramble and am seldom on but...sure.

you are fun..don't worry

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

 
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