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n2dmystic
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beyond the doors of perception

0 posted 2003-09-28 02:42 PM


Being a depressive person, I tend to cycle noticably.  This day I decided to do something positive with my downside, which makes it appear as if it's the upside.  A matter of perspective is what feelings are all about anyway.  As least for me.  I can feel bad, and feel good about my willingness to feel the feelings.

  

Am I looking for my muse
or using writing as a ruse?
To plainly in site stay hidden
as life goes by unbidden

Is writing truly solace?
Helping to initiate the process
of healing from the pain
of a life which I disdain

Seeking words none too sweet
Flowery words truly are not meet
To speak of my souls defeat
As my melancholic heart lies at my feet

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

© Copyright 2003 Joseph D. Carreno II - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2003-09-28 02:48 PM


Hi Joe...I did this same thing today...I was feeling blue, and my muse was just playing, so I let her play and now I feel better.  I enjoyed this one of yours!  and peace to you.
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2 posted 2003-09-28 04:02 PM




(big hugggsssssss) I truly believe words hone and heal in whichever way we desire, sweet friend, it helps to write from both ends up I find to get to know oneself wel, and in the end you find you're no longer depressive but gained a new found sense of wonder! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, this is marvelous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joseph, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

n2dmystic
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beyond the doors of perception
3 posted 2003-10-02 02:24 AM


your responses are too kind, and so caring.  bless you both.  thank you.

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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