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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-28 01:47 PM



Over Looked

slipping through
my world
you think
I am
so cluttered
filling all
the spaces
too full
I do
color outside
the lines
but all
you see are
the flaws
you are
missing the
best parts
of me

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
alisa
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1 posted 2003-09-28 01:57 PM


WOW!!!!

lady, this is great...

Marty Baird
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2 posted 2003-09-28 01:57 PM


Nice
n2dmystic
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beyond the doors of perception
3 posted 2003-09-28 02:02 PM


truly wonderful.  Outside the lines is freedom.  good good write

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
4 posted 2003-09-28 02:04 PM


WOW..I heard that all the way here in Texas. Amazing how words take flight, and cross emotional lines...you know how boundries are invisible lines, and I'm glad this one crossed over the boundry lines and I found them. Says so much. Flaws are only a part..they aren't the sum of who we are.
Loved this.
Shara~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
5 posted 2003-09-28 02:20 PM


it's funner outside the lines
garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-09-28 03:18 PM



Helen, some people are always looking for what
they think is wrong with someone...never trying
to see the perfect things. Most of the time, the
things those people think are wrong...aren't....
just different!!  
Hugs, Lady  
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-09-28 04:10 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Helen, I know just how you feel, sweet friend, or people always focus on celebrities and their wealth, riches, and relationships more than their own loved ones ever so much, then hey look at their loved ones and say, "Why aren't you like them?" (sad sigh) It's always outside the lines where the beauty is, God Bless You, I love this, we value most of all the beauty in everyone here at Passions, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
8 posted 2003-09-28 04:13 PM


Que sera is a hard act to follow,
but you always manage to be one up on her!  

Nice writing slick one~


SmartChick
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9 posted 2003-09-28 04:19 PM


Helen, you have put into words, what I have been thinking.
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10 posted 2003-09-29 10:07 PM


We create the lines, so we are the lines....and coloring only within the lines is narcissism. Reach Out And Color Someone!

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icebox
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in the shadows
11 posted 2003-09-29 10:15 PM


Great!

The best pictures are outside the lines.



dingusjr
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12 posted 2003-09-29 10:44 PM


What a fool he is.....missing the best parts of you!
Larry

passing shadows
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displaced
13 posted 2003-10-01 02:58 AM


what a shame, indeed
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