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Magnus
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0 posted 2003-09-28 01:39 PM


I wish to touch that old brass bell
upon the ridge, the church on high
I wish to ring, to hear the knell
upon the let my last soul’s sigh.

For from this ring, this solemn ring
a tear shall come and wash a cheek.
And from on high an angel sings
a song so soft yet strong not meek.

I wish to hear the lasting gong
before my eyes are darkened sleep
To sing and hum that long lost song
where rivers run both clear and deep.

And on the stone of granite grey
few words will scribe of my request.
For from that bell, the ring will say
I lived for love, and now I rest.


© Copyright 2003 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
n2dmystic
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1 posted 2003-09-28 01:44 PM


beautiful Magnus.  kinda like Frost's "I had a lover's quarrel with the world."  thank you

Peace, Joe
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seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-09-28 02:23 PM


beautiful piece of poetry Barry!
SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-09-28 02:25 PM


But? that's not for a long time, right? No way. Don't talk about that now. Not now.
Shara~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Margherita
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4 posted 2003-09-28 02:25 PM


Very beautiful words, that touch the heart, dear Magnus.
Love, Margherita

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5 posted 2003-09-28 02:35 PM


Barry....This is so Poignant..so well done!  
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6 posted 2003-09-28 03:51 PM




(sigh) I believe at least once in our lives we need to ring that bell and proclaim to the world all the loe we've been blessed with and salutate them with a warm round of applause! (big hugggssssss) Let us keep ringing that bell, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Sunshine
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7 posted 2003-09-28 09:33 PM


Well shoot, Magnus.  Outside my office door is a large church, with a very large bell, which sounds on the hour.

At noon...it sounds for five minutes.

I'm going to have to think now, every time I hear it....

is this the time!?

Dang it...
don't DO this to me!!!

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8 posted 2003-09-28 09:35 PM


Excellent write m'friend!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2003-09-28 10:10 PM


Barry - what else to live for but love my friend...

BC

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