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BUTTERFLY
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CP Junior Member
since 2003-09-28
Posts 17 |
 A BUTTERFLY FLIES FREE I WONDER WHAT THEY SEE FLOATNG SO PEACEFULLY IN A FIELD, ON A TREE THEY FLY SO WONDERFLY THEIR SENSE OF TOUCH IS KEEN THE ONES THAT ARE SEEN THEY ARE SO COLORFUL THEY CAN NEVER BE DULL THEIR THE ONES THAT TURN HEADS THEY CAN BE GREEN OR RED THEY CAN BE ORANGE OR WHITE AND FLY WITH LOTS OF MIGHT A SEVEN DAY LIFESPAN WONDERFUL LIVES THEY RAN |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Believe it or not, sometimes there are some dull butterflies... until you get very close, and look very carefully, and you begin to see them shimmer... Lovely, Chelsea! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-28-2003 12:23 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love butterflies! thank you for sharing this poem. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
beautiful beautiful work! this is so lovely! Enjoy your Sunday  take care. Amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah,I love this one, as it reminds me of one of my favorite things to do, and that is watching butterflies! Beautiful, and softly written...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The ones that turn heads? So special this is... Welcome to Passions CP~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Chelsea, butterflies are so magical and gorgeous and may you always chase them with he youth in your heart and follow your dreams! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, you flitter with little wings of joy and wisdom, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chelsea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautifully written. Very inspiring. Love, Margherita |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Chelsea- I haevn't read your other posts, however with the quality of this one,I'm going to have to go back and see what I've missed!!! Welcome to Passions!! We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Chelsea! What a lovely surprise to see a poem posted by you! Not only was this a soft, soothing, beautiful poem, but it was informative! I hadn't realized that the average life span of a butterfly was only seven days. I like how you transported me skyward and seeing the world through through the eyes of a butterfly. I imagined myself flying on high and looking down. Simply lovely, Dear Chelsea! Loving hugs, Earth Angel |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
This was so pretty. I finally found someone else that says poetry is pretty. Give me a high five! I enjoyed this very much. Keep it up. You are doing great. If you would like I will try to find one I wrote about butterflies about 2 years ago when I first started writing. It's really one of my favorites.I would like to share it with you! That's if I can find it.   Shara~  Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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freehode New Member
since 2003-09-29
Posts 9 |
I'm not quite sure why it was written in all CAPS, but a welldone piece nonetheless. Good flow and pace setting, and vivid imagery. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Chelsea, This is beautiful...you know how I love butterflies. You brought life to flight with your imagination and words. Love, Mom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very pretty words...and to your mom..she brought another butterfly into our hold... *s M |
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