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Open Poetry #29

Autumn Dew Drops

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2003-09-28 12:16 PM

Autumn mornings, they descend
In rivulets, sent forth by breeze;
Formed by night-mists on the trees,
*
and try to fill-up sieves of nests
That summer birds have built and left,
Fall on weed and flower seeds
That nestle in their duff-soft beds;
On rabbit nose,
On deer and chuck,
On me:
*
The congregates, like suicides
Jump random, from the points of leaves
From high aloft they drop and then,
Make noisy, splatter sounds;
(As their soft bodies hit the ground)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-09-28 12:19 PM

wow! awesome write!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2003-09-28 12:28 PM

ice....You are very good at imagery...you make the natural world come alive. Wonderful!

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2003-09-28 12:33 PM

Fantastic...and especially so for us nature watchers!!! Loved every splashing moment...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

4 posted 2003-09-28 12:52 PM

Well done. You paint the quick but heavy feeling of Autumn in the forest.

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

5 posted 2003-09-29 05:12 AM

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