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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-09-28 09:32 AM


June

Never could imagine
summer
nor lifetime
without you
clung
still unaware
of pending twist of fate

September

The silence spell
you cast
nurses now
instead of injure
by some
black magic limbo
it seems as if
we never

were

~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~  Neil Young

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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2003-09-28 09:34 AM


gemjop - I know the silence only to well. I know of these words you write...

BC

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2 posted 2003-09-28 10:26 AM


Well... there are fools, and then again, there are FOOLS..... seems you met one, or else wrote this excellent poem well enough to, uh, fool us....

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Bonnie j
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3 posted 2003-09-28 10:41 AM


Been there, done that don't like the silent spell. Good poem.
Bon-Bon

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4 posted 2003-09-28 11:29 AM


The four months of silence are heavy weight .... but as you say you seem to lift that weight off your shoulders.

Great write!

Love, Margherita

HopeS
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5 posted 2003-09-28 11:47 AM


Wow 4 months is such a long time !!!i can imagine how you feel ... Silence truly hurts

Hope

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6 posted 2003-09-28 12:25 PM


gawd!
Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2003-09-28 05:39 PM


I want some of what you are having!!  

I will get back to you on that black magic thing on the 16th...

Susan

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8 posted 2003-09-28 05:43 PM


we heal slowly
but surely

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
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9 posted 2003-09-28 05:50 PM




(big hugggsssssss) September too has always been my sadest month, sweet friend, for when I was a boy I always had seizures and nightmares at this time of year and also almost ended my life until I turned to God! (sad sigh) I guess seeing the flowers wither and animals go into hibernation is what depresses me sometimes this season, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way that soon April will come again and sprout true new love forever and it will be forever spring, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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10 posted 2003-09-28 05:54 PM


Gemma- I know the silence all too well, and you have put it into words better than I could have ever thought. This is a great write.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

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