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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2003-09-28 05:04 AM



stop this
"stop yer posturing"
dive into a foot too deep
lashes feathered with desire
powder'd
exhale blowing steam
stop this? baby?
peeling me
touch me
I am happy grape.
Stop this start
and blasphemy--
rain
refrain
inundating
upon my weathered tongue...

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-28 05:11 AM


stop???????????

                                                            

vlraynes
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2 posted 2003-09-28 05:30 AM



"dive into a foot too deep
lashes feathered with desire
powder'd
exhale blowing steam
stop this? baby?
peeling me
touch me
I am happy grape.
"


OMG...Karen...I absolutely LOVE this!
You're just too cool...

Smiling big here...good to see you, YOU...

Love you, lady...bunches...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

KristieSue
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3 posted 2003-09-28 09:46 AM


dive into a foot too deep
lashes feathered with desire
powder'd
exhale blowing steam
stop this? baby?
~~~~~~~~~

this was awesom!

"Vision without action is a daydream.  Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

James_A_Fraser
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4 posted 2003-09-28 09:56 AM


Stop? What is this word, "stop"? I've heard it but can't seem to remember what it means just now...



~~J

SharaRose
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5 posted 2003-09-28 04:02 PM


Stunned in my step. WOW.. Ahem...Can't speak. Oh well I'll come back later when I can.
Shara~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2003-09-28 04:10 PM


Yes, the tongue is hard to bite~
I so admire your creative ability Serenity,  
and the way you serve it up!

Magnus
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7 posted 2003-09-28 04:13 PM


Sounds like a "Yes,  no....stop,  don't
stop kinda day...

Cute write Ser...

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8 posted 2003-09-28 04:30 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Geez, can't there be any moment our tongues can be dry enough to taste the emotion? (smiles) You speak of this so very well, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Dark Angel
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9 posted 2003-09-28 04:51 PM


You're amazing Ms Blaze.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


Susan Caldwell
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10 posted 2003-09-28 04:56 PM


oh no..never stop.

Susan

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