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0 posted 2003-09-27 08:34 PM


Steel wheels, Iron rails...
A passing thought as the ribbon
stretched through countless miles
of scrub brush, cacti and tumbleweeds.

A thousand miles of nowhere,  
reflecting of another time as the
gentle sway of the Iron Horse
lulled me into that mental time
machine of day dreams.

Count the ties, feel the click of
rail, smell the coal fires burning
as the chugg, chugg gave the
gut the feel of power.  

That red caboose dragging far behind,
where coffee brewed slowly over the
potbellied stove.  A cup....laced tenderly
with sugar and the following sip and
ahhhh meant that heaven was there
upon that steel rail....as a thousand
miles of nowhere drifted into memories
and dreams.

The startling darkness of the unsuspected
tunnel, where sounds grew fearsomely
loud...and the breath was held until the
tunnel end again shone the light.  

Imagine the days, where deer and antelope
played the range and a nickel bought a
buck’s worth of anything...

Were those guys on horses just cowboys
or....were their bandanas around their
necks today?

A thousand miles of heaven’s rail
as the slow sip brings yet another
“Ahhhhh”.......

© Copyright 2003 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-27 08:37 PM


enjoyed the write n read  very nice,,,

                                                        

dingusjr
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since 2003-09-24
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2 posted 2003-09-27 08:57 PM


"a nickle bought a buck's worth of anything".....I like that..like the whole damn
thing........thanks for sharing!           Larry

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
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3 posted 2003-09-27 09:29 PM


Just Awesome!!!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

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