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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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VA

0 posted 2003-09-27 07:02 PM



lay down
the pain
lay down
your head
upon HIS lap
rest
your heavy
heart
lay
down
the
tears
lay
down
the
insecurities
tonight
heaven
is waiting...


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-27-2003 07:09 PM).]

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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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1 posted 2003-09-27 07:09 PM


invitation accepted.

this was calming Kris, soft and soothing.

~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~  Neil Young

Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-09-27 07:11 PM


nice write Kris
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3 posted 2003-09-27 07:56 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, He is always here for us and the heavens will always be answering our tears and heeding our calls! (sigh) You speak with pure compassion, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-09-27 07:57 PM


Absolutely Beautiful Kris
is why I love the angels . . .
xxoo

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