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James McInerney
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0 posted 2003-09-27 02:02 PM


"Today Not Tomorrow"

Tomorrow’s sky will never show,
Such Beauty, as it did today,
The way the sun "sets" and "rises",
Will happen in a different way.
The rain may fall again upon me,
Though it won’t taste or feel the same,
The wind may be calm and gentle,
Yet it still won’t recite your name.
The world will keep on turning,
As though it knew no other way,
It won’t have realised how beautiful,
It was just Yesterday....



© Copyright 2003 James McInerney - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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1 posted 2003-09-27 02:05 PM


beautiful first post...welcome to the passion...h
Saunni
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2 posted 2003-09-27 02:08 PM


Very BEAUTIFUL!!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

Martie
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3 posted 2003-09-27 02:09 PM


Amazing how things can change in just one day....I enjoyed this!  Welcome to Passions.
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4 posted 2003-09-27 02:10 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww this is such a light-hearted and graceful debut, sweet friend, today will soon become tomorrow and then the same treasures can be shared again and again! This is wonderful, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet James, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your spirited poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and please check your E-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Fariegirl
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5 posted 2003-09-27 02:11 PM


Nice poem, welcome to Piptalk.
Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-09-27 02:53 PM


James, what a beautiful day...
Welcome to Passions!  

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Magnus
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7 posted 2003-09-27 03:33 PM


Very nice for a grand entrance,  welcome
to Passions.  Enjoyed this poem and you
are right...they are all different, aren't
they?

Paula Finn
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8 posted 2003-09-29 10:05 AM


No it may never be as beautiful as yesterday...but how can you tell if you don't look at tomorrow? Welcome to our world...nice write
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9 posted 2003-09-29 10:20 AM


Welcome to Passions, where yesterdays can become the future.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
10 posted 2003-09-29 10:24 AM


Beautiful first post!
Welcome to Passions...
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

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