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n2dmystic
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beyond the doors of perception

0 posted 2003-09-27 11:37 AM


Hi folks.  Hope to fit.  Have enjoyed reading many posts so far.  Blessings from the big MT.  Peace, Joe

Now the sound of her name brings a deep longing.  I miss you, JoAnn.

Your Name

Your name,
like a teardrop,
softly, gently,
drops.
Expands,
glistens in the light,
and spatters,
as it drops
upon my ear,
and its' wetness
moistens my parched soul.

© Copyright 2003 Joseph D. Carreno II - All Rights Reserved
dingusjr
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1 posted 2003-09-27 12:01 PM


Bless your little parched soul.....I like it.
welcome from one newby to another!
Larry

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2 posted 2003-09-27 12:08 PM


Joe~

A great big WELCOME -


Lovely, lovely write~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-09-27 12:08 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Joseph, this is such a beautiful debut, sweet friend, tears truly heal the soul as they display our true emotions and let us know someone is there to care! God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this! Welcome to Passions, sweet Joseph, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-27-2003 12:38 PM).]

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-09-27 12:27 PM


Welcome to Passions!

I look forward to reading more of you...I think you'll fit just fine and love it here!

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
5 posted 2003-09-27 01:47 PM


welcome to the passion...and just weave in to our threads...h
Saunni
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6 posted 2003-09-27 01:52 PM


Awesome write and welcome! This is a great place to share! Love your work.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2003-09-27 01:58 PM


Oh yes, you'll fit right in.
Very pretty poem Joe..

Welcome to Passions~

Martie
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8 posted 2003-09-27 02:12 PM


Hi Joe!  Welcome...Enjoyed your first post!
Magnus
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9 posted 2003-09-27 03:21 PM


Hi Joe from MT.  Welcome, and this is an
excellent poem. Like your words and of course
who isn't a romantic?

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
10 posted 2003-09-27 04:46 PM


Loved this. Excellent first post!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

QjQ
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11 posted 2003-09-27 05:06 PM


good penning,,

welcome to PiP,,

                                                       

Aimster
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12 posted 2003-09-27 05:19 PM


Joe-

welcome to Passions. This is so beautiful. I hope you come to love this place as much as we all have. thank you for your lovely reply to my poem. Take care.

Amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Sunshine
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13 posted 2003-09-27 07:04 PM



The forums are expanding.  Welcome, Sir...you're going to fit in just right.  We'll all scootch over a bit...there's always room for another poet!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

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Saluting with misty eyes
14 posted 2003-09-27 10:42 PM


Joe... the only thing that could have made this better is if I had written it
lol
Outstanding first post, Sir. I definately look forward to reading more of your scribbles.

Welcome to Passions!!!!!

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

n2dmystic
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beyond the doors of perception
15 posted 2003-09-28 02:32 AM


Wow, I feel like I just got home, and I did, both literally, and literally ;-}  Thank you for such a warm welcome.  I hope that you don't get bored with my rhyming.  And for you all, an excerpt from a love poem:

I pray you Love, and Peace aboundin’
In all you do, Happiness is found in
A song of Joy in your heart asoundin’
Warmth and safety, for you surroundin’

Peace, Joe

from the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

Midnitesun
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Gaia
16 posted 2003-09-28 11:08 AM


Welcome to the big blue poetry sky.
Enjoyed the nice tribute to Joanne.

Richy
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17 posted 2003-09-28 11:28 AM




That's really nice Joe, when the mere thought of that speical person, can mean so much...

Welcome to Passions friend!

Richy


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