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KristieSue
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0 posted 2003-09-27 10:53 AM



Pains and aches
run through
my mind

Groans of despair
escape from
my chest

Agony and despair
follow me
all my life

"Vision without action is a daydream.  Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

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n2dmystic
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1 posted 2003-09-27 10:58 AM


sadly vivid.  a nice write.  Peace, Joe

seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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2 posted 2003-09-27 11:13 AM


Awww, every one has worth, and that includes you. One thing I know you do is write beautifully!!!! There's ONE constant in this world, and that's change. Things never stay the same. They do evolve. It will for you, too.
SharaRose @-->--

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3 posted 2003-09-27 12:58 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kristie, I echo what Shara said, sweet friend, we all will hurt once in a while but you will only grow atronger and then find all your heart desires and true comfort you deserve will come! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel healing hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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4 posted 2003-09-27 01:46 PM


Yep, you can run but you cannot hide!
I'm sorry for this, and I understand it completely.

Be well KristieSue~

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5 posted 2003-09-27 01:49 PM


KristieSue, feeling this way is so hard and many of us feel that way or have at some point. I wish your heart light and peace! Sincerely, Sauni.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

KristieSue
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6 posted 2003-09-27 03:26 PM


Joe~Thank you...

Shara~I know I have worth, thank you for the encouragement.  Change is something I don't deal well with, and God seems to be doing a total uprooting of my life right now.  I'm just waiting for things to slow down just a LITTLE...

Noah~I appreciate it.  Thank you.

BluesSerenade~I've tried running, it didn't work.  Thank you for understanding.

Saunni~Thank God I have a friend in my life who can understand, because she has been there.  Life isn't easy for anyone...unfortunately.

"Vision without action is a daydream.  Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

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