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Jezebel Eyes

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Marge Tindal
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Jezebel Eyes
~*Marge Tindal*~

Scalding cries from Jezebel eyes
full the tears-in-shed
Strange how heartache comes around
when another turns his head~

He looks with eyes that plainly see
the termagant that you are
Scarlet is the letter etched
in his visions now from afar~

Yours were eyes of idolatry
for one not willing to wear your wrath
Dry the eyes Mz. Jezebel
another victim soon will cross your path~

Smile a smile ... puesdo-sincere
let the light dance in your Jezebel eyes
Rememember to keep equal footing this time
so as to lofty pedestals of praise
this one will not rise~



*Sometimes (if you're lucky) it's just a POEM*
Brought to you, courtesy of that impish little dark muse, Blesaka~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Ericc
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1 posted 09-27-2003 09:48 AM       View Profile for Ericc   Email Ericc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ericc

The language that you use to catch such a powerful emotion is beautiful Marge.
Eric
ethome
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2 posted 09-27-2003 10:21 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Wow! Marge this one really packs an intense whallop!!


Good writing!

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

Marty Baird
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3 posted 09-27-2003 10:39 AM       View Profile for Marty Baird   Email Marty Baird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marty Baird

You've done a nice job of catching the essence of this individual from the Bible.
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this lady has caught me a few times, to my dismay ;-} good write.  Peace, Joe

seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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I certainly appreciate the comments from you all~
It's such a pleasure to be a poetess and be able to share~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

Kethry
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6 posted 09-27-2003 06:17 PM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

Oh My, this is wonderful. I like your darker muse.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


Corinne
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Ooh, this is a tricky one to read - layered and layered with meaning.

I like this - it's a different kind of voice from the one I'm used to hearing.

Hugs!

Corinne
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Kethry & Corinne~
Two of my favorite ladies, I thank you both~

Yes, that little Blesaka sneaks one in on me every now and again~

I SO appreciate you gals reading this one~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

Betty
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9 posted 09-27-2003 09:53 PM       View Profile for Betty   Email Betty   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Betty

Marge I really like this one.
Love,
Betty
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10 posted 09-27-2003 10:25 PM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

Dear Marge:  Jezebels usually do get their just desserts, in time!  Great poem!

Betty Lou Hebert

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Now see, it has always seemed to me that Jezebels just got desserts.  

An interesting write.  I have met this lady many times in many guises.

I hope you don't mind me commenting, even though I'm not one of the gals.

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Oh boy !
A double-dose of Betty's and one sweet IceBox~

I appreciate the reads, the sweet replies and send *Huglets* in return~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

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Yep. I think we all have met this Jezebel a time or two. In fact I have two poems about this jaded hearted person. I have one that I will post it's called, Romeo has a horse called Jezebel.
Good one
Bon-Bon
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Thanks Bonnie~
It's a strange shade of green that glints in the eye of a Jezebel, for sure~
Sincerest *Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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