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Jezebel Eyes
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Jezebel Eyes ~*Marge Tindal*~ Scalding cries from Jezebel eyes full the tears-in-shed Strange how heartache comes around when another turns his head~ He looks with eyes that plainly see the termagant that you are Scarlet is the letter etched in his visions now from afar~ Yours were eyes of idolatry for one not willing to wear your wrath Dry the eyes Mz. Jezebel another victim soon will cross your path~ Smile a smile ... puesdo-sincere let the light dance in your Jezebel eyes Rememember to keep equal footing this time so as to lofty pedestals of praise this one will not rise~ *Sometimes (if you're lucky) it's just a POEM* Brought to you, courtesy of that impish little dark muse, Blesaka~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
The language that you use to catch such a powerful emotion is beautiful Marge. Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! Marge this one really packs an intense whallop!! Good writing! Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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Marty Baird Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 90Georgia, U.S. |
You've done a nice job of catching the essence of this individual from the Bible. |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
this lady has caught me a few times, to my dismay ;-} good write. Peace, Joe seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I certainly appreciate the comments from you all~ It's such a pleasure to be a poetess and be able to share~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Oh My, this is wonderful. I like your darker muse. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ooh, this is a tricky one to read - layered and layered with meaning. I like this - it's a different kind of voice from the one I'm used to hearing. Hugs! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry & Corinne~ Two of my favorite ladies, I thank you both~ Yes, that little Blesaka sneaks one in on me every now and again~ I SO appreciate you gals reading this one~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Marge I really like this one. Love, Betty |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Jezebels usually do get their just desserts, in time! Great poem! Betty Lou Hebert |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Now see, it has always seemed to me that Jezebels just got desserts.  An interesting write. I have met this lady many times in many guises. I hope you don't mind me commenting, even though I'm not one of the gals. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh boy ! A double-dose of Betty's and one sweet IceBox~  I appreciate the reads, the sweet replies and send *Huglets* in return~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Yep. I think we all have met this Jezebel a time or two. In fact I have two poems about this jaded hearted person. I have one that I will post it's called, Romeo has a horse called Jezebel. Good one Bon-Bon  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks Bonnie~ It's a strange shade of green that glints in the eye of a Jezebel, for sure~ Sincerest *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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