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KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-09-26 10:51 PM


Stay awake and with me, my Darling
The flame won't last forever
Feed dies down, though her appetite
Quivers not for never.

Lift your head
Into the sleep
Of webs and carcasses below...
Sink into the air above
And embrass the dark aglow

Fear not to cry more tears, my Love
Each puddle shoos away the first...
One more to burn your clammy skin...
One more to quench my acid thirst.

© Copyright 2003 Lauren - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-09-26 11:07 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This seemed dark and eerie but this was beautifully written, sweet friend, I truly hope your heart has colorful and comforting love as you are so deserving of true happiness! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel friendship hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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2 posted 2003-09-26 11:08 PM


enteresting write,,,

                                                       

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow
3 posted 2003-09-26 11:10 PM


Noah, even in not-so-good times, you always manage to bring a smile to my face. Thanks for the hugs...I haven't gotten a real one in a while and it was nice to read the words. Thank you, friend.

Q, thanks muchly

Edder
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since 2003-04-02
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4 posted 2003-09-28 09:54 AM


darkly beautiful darlin'. keep fanning that flame. luv ya
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