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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2003-09-26 08:59 PM



UnDecided
~ By Sue ~

I wonder if it showed
The fear I felt inside
When he asked me out
I never did decide

I haven't been out in quite a while
Really I had no intentions to
To get involved once again
I don't know if I can do

Tall, dark and rather handsom
He likes to go fishing too
He said to choose where I wanted to go
I told him that I have no clue

I could feel myself shaking inside
It has been way too long for me
A little afraid, maybe alot
I never did answer, you see

9-26-03


© Copyright 2003 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-09-26 10:06 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Sue, follow whatever your heart tells you, sweet friend, it never hurts to give someone a chance then make your final decision depending on how comfortable you are! (sigh) You have the right to feel and decide, sweet friend, so let your heart speak, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-09-26 10:32 PM


give it a chance Sue...just have some fun...

hugsss
M

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2003-09-27 12:51 PM


Sue, my friend, those first independent steps are the hardest, but just go for it! Once you get in there, the shiny you will show through, and life will open up some new wonderful doors!  Much enjoyed this, as we are all undecided sometimes...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-09-27 05:46 AM


oh Sue...you have written me so well...I do know how this is!

what you feel in your heart...go with that

Richy
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5 posted 2003-09-27 06:36 AM




Hi Sue, how’ve you been? I hope well!
Sue, your both fisherman (fisherwoman?) right?
Your alluring scent has attracted this big lunker.
And he’s giving you a nibble, or two right?
You can feel the line tightening can’t you?
So... Set That Hook!
And reel that sucker in! (there is a sucker fish, for all you non fisher types...lol)
Doesn’t sound like he’s gonna put up much of a fight.
Get him in close to shore, and if he’s a biggun, get out the net.
Leave the hook in his mouth, until you thoroughly check him out though.
Make sure he’s fresh looking and all. (well, maybe not too fresh!)
And make sure you check the state fishing regs for the proper specie,
size, and in season limits.
If he’s a Largemouth (Bass), and starts yapping all over the place, throw em back in the drink
Same goes if he’s a Bullhead, who needs it!
But if he seems like a nice catch, then well???

I wish you all the best Sue!

Just remember, there’s a lot more fish in the sea...
Too bad, too many of them, are Crappie’s...

Well, as my fishin buddies would say, “Tight Lines and Screaming Reels!
WooooHooo!

Happy Fishin Sue!

Richy

p.s. if he’s a keeper, hold em up by the tail, and take a picture for us, OK?

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6 posted 2003-09-27 08:42 AM


SweetSuzieQ~
GO FOR IT GAL !

LOL@PapaLunchMaker !!
Richy, you crack me up .. (that's such a GREAT reply)~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
7 posted 2003-09-27 11:02 AM


Nothing ventured, nothing gained. All I hear in that is logic, and what's logical about love? Solve your little enigma, with caution. I liked this. Nothing wrong with having your guard up when treading on waters unknown. All the best in your quest of the heart.
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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beyond the doors of perception
8 posted 2003-09-27 11:09 AM


remember, this ain't the dress rehearsal, this is the Big Show.  Get it or don't there ain't no middle.  Plus any woman who loves bassin'... Nice write.  Peace, Joe

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