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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-09-26 06:25 PM

Upon bloodstained heart
forever beaten red
you made no mark

Foolish boy
it always has
and always will
look this way
it was mind you murdered
fleeing black
leaving the blanks
for me to fill
and grieve

Oh passive love
always missing beats

Despite what they say
its not heart
that bears the burden
of all we see
and all
we never will
nor the turn of shoulder
caught in loves trap
or features of lovers soul
draped across our own

But mind
that carries the weight
no human spine
should be able to hold
I let you into
my home
the only place you don't
physically exist
yet constantly pace
over eyelids

Oh spineless love
I beat drum for end
forget heart pauses

roam longer here

with caution

Instant karma's gonna get you.

[This message has been edited by gemjop (09-26-2003 06:27 PM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-26 06:31 PM

Enjoyed,,,,

Mordecai's Mommy
Junior Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 12
San Miguel, Ca

2 posted 2003-09-26 06:41 PM

Nice write. Very powerful.

Mordecai's Mommy

Like a dove, I am now flying free...

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2003-09-26 07:01 PM

loved the contrast and the emote.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

4 posted 2003-09-26 07:04 PM

thanks guys. I do believe I am turning another corner in my mind, at long last.

~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-09-26 10:04 PM

But mind
that carries the weight
no human spine
should be able to hold

thus my bad back..grins

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-09-26 10:39 PM

(big hugggsssssss) I guess a heart of gold also has to be tender and soft like silk if the spine is going to hold up, as to hold a golden anvil of a heart can easily leave one spineless! (sad sigh) You describe this feeling so well, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-09-26 10:41 PM

I let you into
my home
the only place you don't
physically exist
yet constantly pace
over eyelids

Oh, goodness, Gemma...I love this part. Another keeper, my friend.

Hugs and Love

Ethel

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

8 posted 2003-09-27 09:04 AM

It is a difficult thing
  to tell the difference
  between a heart of gold
  and one of "Fool's" Gold.

      ... a new leaf unfolds!

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

9 posted 2003-09-27 09:52 AM

You seem to have mastered the art of alchemy Gem. To take the lead of your pain and turn it to the gold of your expressed soul.
Thank you.
Eric

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