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Revealing
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Revealing |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Revealing I reveal my seasons as time brings to view the means of me and I shed the leaving of memories that can no longer fulfill, the extremes of the love and the passion once felt, years in the making, taking only moments to lose. The hauntings follow my words, quotes seeping through the truth of tomorrow unseen, unfelt, my heart trying to open, making acceptance the only term to which I subscribe and the only commitment willing to draft in the flowing words that form daily, reminding me that there is more to life than wants and that my needs are modest though lacking and that when I am overcome in senses, it is time that will reveal all. Time lessens the hurt, time eases the pain and with or without words, I am present, here for you, challenged by each new day, never empty because I carry my dreams inside where they rest, until they can be wrapped and ribboned, gifted to share with another when time reveals a new season... and I bare my soul again. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yes........M........exactly. very well written, and much truth... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
making acceptance the only term to which I subscribe and the only commitment willing to draft in the flowing words Powerful write, and these words touched the most as a girlfriend once told me, the most difficult part of mankind is accepting things, as they are, not fighting them, but trying despratly to find value in all things. Sending hugs and smiles your way. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
A very touching write.It shows the many seasons of your heart and soul and I wouldn't want to miss even one.  Crystal |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
"and I bare my soul again." might I say..you look lovely in that light and wearing nothing to cover you... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Donna, good evening..great to see you here hugs and thank you Maureen LeeJ, not fighting them is sometimes very hard to do and I have finally learned my lesson, because it doesn't help to get you anywhere. I love that thought... to find value in all things. hugs and smiles M Crystal, you are so sweet... gave me an evening smile, thank you M Ron, "might I say..you look lovely in that light and wearing nothing to cover you..." you are such a tease..but thank you for the thought...  M |
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