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Open Poetry #29
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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2003-09-26 02:43 PM

~*~

If the scattering of colored leaves could speak
Falling all about me, through the sunblind seek
About the air on wings from up above the atmosphere
Sprinkled from your hands, falling down around me here

Lifting up my chin with such a slight of hand
Just above my shoulder, often there to softly land
Whispering in long consideration echoing the fall migration
Soft about my smile, refreshing calm amid the arbitration

Lifting up my heart again to capable as never been
Falling into you, the spin of win within, around me then
Warm that draws me in my sleep to contours free and fair
Guiding every curve about me soft against you laying there

Lifting me to heights of dreams that have awaited stars
Shouldering the certainty lipped luscious, Venus to her Mars
Bringing me to chaos that your voice so gently folds
Scattering my colors in reverse of gravity, finding love that holds

Copyright Kkh 9/26/03
© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-09-26 02:54 PM

Oh this was lovely!  I adore Fall and how it inspires the poets best works.

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2 posted 2003-09-26 02:56 PM

love the ending especially...

Scattering my colors in reverse of gravity, finding love that holds

wouldn't that be loverly...

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3 posted 2003-09-26 02:58 PM

I love everything about this.Even though Fall isn't my favorite season I still enjoy and you've just shown me why.
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4 posted 2003-09-26 03:11 PM

very nicely done.. softly sensual..and tender...
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5 posted 2003-09-26 05:49 PM

Kathleen~
EVERYTHING about this piece is 'lipped luscious'~

Your gentle thoughts are mesmerizing~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Martie
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6 posted 2003-09-26 06:48 PM

TD...I'm running out of words to tell you how good a poet you are...each poem is filled up with beautiful, and this one is no exceptiong.
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