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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-26 01:39 PM

Loudly Quiet

every tear
I have
matches yours
in heartbreak
all I
wanted to
do was
love
you

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

1 posted 2003-09-26 01:45 PM

Love alone is easy
just be completely open
privately
without need;
love that seeks
the sensory jolt
of unmet reciprocity
is hard.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2003-09-26 01:52 PM

The rotten end of the stick usually collapses and the holder gets to fall into the canyon of love hurt.......Like icebox indicated it takes two to give and take mutually.

Good write!

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-09-26 02:08 PM

Makes me think of an inner scream...wow. Hurts.
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-09-26 02:57 PM

damn

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-09-26 03:05 PM

This tears the heart.

Crystal

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-09-26 05:52 PM

OneSlick~
Oh my ... the gentleness of this ache is consuming~

GREAT penning, poetess-of-the-seashore~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

7 posted 2003-09-26 08:05 PM

hearts
twinned,
the halves
of a shell

neither
can open
without
the other

break one
and
both
shatter

You've inspired me....I'm going to go post this!

~~J

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-09-26 09:58 PM

ouch

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-09-26 10:03 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Helen, I send many angel healing hugs your way, sweet friend, I understand your tears and we wish for loves whispers to sing jubilantly in your heart! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

alisa
Member

since 2003-08-20

Posts 70
Florida

10 posted 2003-09-28 12:02 PM

you make me wanna cry...

but this is an amzing poem...

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