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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2003-09-26 10:52 AM



While You Walk That Path

I can't make you understand
no, I just can't make you see
until we both walk the same road
that this is how we choose it to be.
Your love has never been in doubt
for that matter neither has been mine...

it's just that sometimes within our lives....
our own paths we must seek to find...

neither one is right
as much as neither one is wrong....

the only truth in life
is making the journey to where we belong....

While you walk that path
to where the spirit learns to be free~
I hope that you will know...
how very much you mean to me~


For Bill with love always....

{quietly listening to the wisdom of the spirits today....
and thanking them for their wisdom.....
and just wondering where is that cowboy
who has taught me to listen so well...}



It's better than I could have planned, it's made me....who I am...Trace....

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (09-26-2003 11:00 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-09-26 10:53 AM



I'll nudge the folks
that will make the cowboy
take note...

he'll appreciate
that you've been listening...

but then,
you always do.

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-09-26 10:56 AM


Gentle Spirit
A lovely write and a wonderful read.

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3 posted 2003-09-26 10:58 AM


No nudge needed Kari, just a word of thanks was all....cuz sometimes, the spirits speak in their own way, through their own messengers....
thanks sunny lady, I love ya.

I must have had my momma's will
and Gods Amazing Grace...

I'm a survivor....
(Reba)

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2003-09-26 10:59 AM


Sey, thanks hon, do appreciate it.  
angelblueyes
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5 posted 2003-09-26 11:41 AM


This is great. Much enjoyed.
Crystal

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6 posted 2003-09-26 04:16 PM




(smiles) Oh Donna, this is beautiful, sweet friend, sometimes we must listen to the spirits along with our heart, for He knows all and will never let us go astray! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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7 posted 2003-09-26 04:37 PM


GentlestOfSpirits~
This is such a lovely outpour of your heart~

It is just soooooo good to see you penning such happiness~
Love Ya'
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

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8 posted 2003-09-26 04:43 PM


The perfect poem for me to read today! Thank you, Donna!


Linda

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9 posted 2003-09-29 10:31 AM


poppin in to say thanks to all, appreciate the replies.  Peace to poetry land.
Hugsssssssss

passing shadows
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10 posted 2003-09-29 12:41 PM


Donna, I too miss you when we're not around here as much as we could be if not for life...

good to read your heart again

n2dmystic
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11 posted 2003-09-29 01:08 PM


what a sweet loving write.  Lucky guy!  

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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12 posted 2003-09-29 01:18 PM


Beautiful write sweet lady!
Love ya!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

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14 posted 2003-10-01 07:09 AM


Beautiful!!  

Charisma

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15 posted 2003-10-01 09:07 AM


Donna - this is lovely


the only truth in life
is making the journey to where we belong....

YES a commandment even
*smile*
a beautiful sentiment
from a beautiful Lady
xxoo

Gentle Spirit
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16 posted 2003-10-02 08:17 AM


Thanks everyone for all the wonderful replies.

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-02-2003 01:54 PM).]

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17 posted 2003-10-02 08:28 AM


He should be happy that he is lucky to have you and your heart of gold Donna.  It is good to see a happier post this morning from you.  
JamesMichael
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18 posted 2003-10-03 04:23 AM


enjoyed...James
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19 posted 2003-10-03 06:33 PM


enjoyed
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