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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-09-26 07:51 AM


I Witnessed Fairyland
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This was written for a challenge at The Meadow poetry board , there was a picture of a fairy on a toadstool , we had to include the words , curiosity , visions, crouching ,magical , garden, scented, believe , rise,
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I Witnessed Fairyland

Was the garden magical
I was about to find out
Always full of curiosity
Although still in doubt

Would I believe the tales
What others had seen
Those visions of fairies
So gentle and serene

I am told to tip toe quietly
Amongst the bluebells
To the toadstools of red
The fairy family dwells

Crouching in front of me
Right before my eyes
A fairy upon a toadstool
Slowly began to rise

Gossamer wings spread
She playfully danced
Magical and enchanting
I stood there entranced

Scented jasmine blooms
Floated through the air
The fairy family gathered
Each with golden hair

For all the folklore written
I began to understand
Fairies circled around me
I witnessed fairyland

HopeĀ©2003

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-09-26 09:38 AM


Hope~
Lady, this is delightful~

I believe~

'For all the folklore written
I began to understand
Fairies circled around me
I witnessed fairyland'


I LOVE IT~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~



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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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HopeS
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2 posted 2003-09-26 09:45 AM


Thanks Marge , it was written in a couple of hours on and off this afternoon , it was fun gathering  it together  

Hope

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3 posted 2003-09-26 09:49 AM



...*I Believe*...

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-09-26 09:54 AM


HopeS
Your talent is showing, wonderful write.

Kethry
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5 posted 2003-09-26 10:40 AM


I'd believe an eye witness, your words make me believe anyway.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



HopeS
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6 posted 2003-09-26 10:56 AM


thank you Enchantress , your fairy is so pretty

Hope

HopeS
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7 posted 2003-09-26 10:58 AM


thank you Seymour for bestowing me such wonderful compliments

Hope

HopeS
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8 posted 2003-09-26 11:00 AM


Thanks Kethry , it created pretty thoughts into what was a normal mundane day

Hope

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9 posted 2003-09-26 11:42 PM






(smiles) Yay! Oh Hope, I too witnessed their special land, and I got proof, awwwwwww, look at this sweet fairy child napping! (kiss on cheek) I love Mutington's Meadow and have long posted there too, and every now and hen I post under the name Shakira Siempre there, God Bless You, I'll go check this out too, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Saunni
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10 posted 2003-09-26 11:53 PM


This is so heartfelt! I pictured it all. Great write.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

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