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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-09-26 07:42 AM


Rewrite:


The Beginning

In the beginning
God created the end by
Birthing time and change


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-09-26 08:00 AM


and with child.......

Good morning, what a marvelous way to start the day...happy Friday, you clever man.  


ethome
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2 posted 2003-09-26 08:08 AM


Very tangible approach my friend.
Not mine but I appreciate the fact that you're a thinker.

Eric

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Kahlil
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3 posted 2003-09-26 08:29 AM


I like your thinkingness, too...~K~
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4 posted 2003-09-26 08:30 AM



Excellent, Sy...Excellent...

The well is Quite Deep
this beautiful morning...


Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-09-26 08:30 AM


LeeJ
Have a good one and thank you my dear.


Eric,
Thank you my friend, nice comment.

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-09-26 08:34 AM


Kahlil
And I enjoy your read and reply.

Sunshine,
Thank you love,



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7 posted 2003-09-26 09:18 AM


Good thoughts as always this morn Sy!
Chilly here...hot cup of Chai tea?
~Morning hugs, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

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8 posted 2003-09-26 09:21 AM


agree,, good one
bernie

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9 posted 2003-09-26 09:26 AM


Good morning, T-Man!

I see that thy thinking cap is firmly in place on thy divine crown of glory.

Now, which came first, the Beginning or the End?--or did you make them simultaneously? lol

Loves 'n huggums,
EA

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2003-09-26 09:35 AM


Nancy,
Thank you dear be right there for tea.

Thank you bernie.

Earth Angel
That my dear is the paradox. LOL


Spiros Zafiris
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11 posted 2003-09-26 10:07 AM


..Seymour Tabin../\..kinda 'heavy' little poem..i think i like it; even understand it, a bit..however short, it sings..nice..

../\..Spiros

----------------------calm--------

Kethry
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12 posted 2003-09-26 10:10 AM


birthing time and change is okay by me as long as it is not time FOR a change.
Kethry

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13 posted 2003-09-26 10:10 AM


"The Beginning

In the beginning
God created the end by
Birthing time and change"

Sy..insightful and thoughtful offering...
I enjoyed...


GypsyGirl
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14 posted 2003-09-26 10:12 AM


Wonderful write to start off another day.
Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2003-09-26 10:40 AM


Spiros,
Thank you so much for the read and reply.

Kethry
LOL you never know.

Cpat,
Thank you my friend.

GypsyGirl,
You are a sweet gypsy.

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16 posted 2003-09-26 11:00 AM


Wow...these are amazing words to ponder this morning Seymour my friend. Thankyou.  Brrrr..Enchantress is correct in saying it is chilly this morn. Hot biscuits and honey? Yummy....where's my teacup? hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2003-09-26 11:23 AM


Chris,
You are a love, be right there.

angelblueyes
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18 posted 2003-09-26 11:38 AM


A wonderful read to read this morning. this says so much in so little.Makes you think when was the beginning and when was the end.Did he create them in order or not? Ahhh Sy you got me thinking.
Crystal

Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2003-09-26 12:11 PM


Crystal
A wonderful thing to do. Thank you dear for the read.

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20 posted 2003-09-26 11:51 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Except I don't think He called it the "end" and rather wished it to just be a beginning that went on over and over again, and mankind then made the end realized! (sigh) This is excellent wisdom, sweet friend, God Bless You, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 2003-09-27 01:13 AM


Noah,
A big thanks to you my friend.

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