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ethome
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0 posted 2003-09-26 07:34 AM



Morning Love

                 Kiss me softly darling Jasmine
                 oh my heart begins to stir
                 when your searching lips deliver
                 sweet delight that makes me quiver
                 from the warmth of your lips pursed.
                 Kiss me deeply darling Jasmine
                 when the light returns to earth.

                 Chorus:
                 There's is moonlight in the evening
                 there are stars that glow above
                 but there is nothing like the feeling
                 I get with you in morning love.

                 Take my hand and all my wishes
                 upon your breast when morning comes.
                 Take me where my dreams won't perish
                 across the hills of love I cherish
                 and count my heart-beats one by one.
                 Drink my passion darling Jasmine
                 while our romance greets the sun.

                 Rep Chorus:

                 Tag:
                 Just you and I darling Jasmine
                 You and I when the morning comes
                 There can be no greater pleasure
                 Than you and I and morning love.
                 you and I and morning love...........fade
                 [B][/B]
© Eric True

The best teachers have the biggest ears

© Copyright 2003 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-09-26 08:29 AM



I do believe
I'd give my eye teeth
to hear this one...

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2003-09-26 08:32 AM


nice... if it hasn't been put to music..it should be...

enjoyed...

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-09-26 08:37 AM


Eric,
Excellent write.

ethome
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4 posted 2003-09-26 09:25 AM


Thank you Karilea I appreciate the wish and I'm trying to make it come true.

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

ethome
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5 posted 2003-09-26 09:26 AM


Cpat thanks and yes it will be put to music in the future. I appreciate the read and the response.


Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

Paula Finn
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6 posted 2003-09-26 09:31 AM


Ah Eric you charm the songbirds right out of the trees with this one...
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-09-26 09:36 AM


You are one poetically romantic lyricist!

To morning love!

EA

LeeJ
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8 posted 2003-09-26 09:40 AM


lovely simply beautiful
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
9 posted 2003-09-26 09:51 AM


Love to hear this one...beautiful!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

Martie
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10 posted 2003-09-26 10:40 AM


Eric...I would love to hear this beauty too...please.
QjQ
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11 posted 2003-09-26 06:24 PM


very nice,,,,

                                                       

Kethry
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12 posted 2003-09-26 06:44 PM


Eric,
with the scent of Jasmine in my nostrils and the words of you on my lips, I have found a space to smile in reminisce. Thanks you.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



JamesMichael
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13 posted 2003-09-26 06:59 PM


Excellent...James
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14 posted 2003-09-26 11:00 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I long so much to hear another audio file of yours singing one of your lovely songs, sweet friend, you really got to get these songs on a gold or platinum record immediately, yay! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Saunni
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15 posted 2003-09-27 12:08 PM


This is so cool!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
16 posted 2003-09-27 12:44 PM


hello Eric

love the chorus...it's perfect

"There's is moonlight in the evening
there are stars that glow above
but there is nothing like the feeling
I get with you in morning love."

M

ethome
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17 posted 2003-09-27 05:48 AM


Thanks so much to everyone that replied to this piece. I sure appreciate the responses.
I will do my best to get a comment out to all of you.

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

n2dmystic
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18 posted 2003-09-27 10:38 AM


a beautiful sensitive piece.  I loved it.  thanks.  Peace, Joe in the big MT
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19 posted 2003-09-27 10:45 AM


Oh my goodness, Eric...this is a beautiful love song....
Like the others, I would love to hear it to music, too.
Hugs  
Ethel

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20 posted 2003-09-27 12:21 PM


ETHome~
ALWAYS a pleasurable read, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

ethome
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21 posted 2003-09-27 02:57 PM


Thank you Joe, Ethel and Marge....I appreciate the kind words. Glad you could drop in for a moment.

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

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