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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-09-26 03:23 AM


  
Graphic By Littlewing_Sue

~>o<~
There is something deep within me
that is called my inner space
That longs to be with you, my Love
to look upon your face

When the distance between us
becomes to be all these miles
The longing to see you, my sweet Love
turns into the worse of trials

From my eye is formed
a tear to crystalize
Then within my heart
I suddenly come to realize

No matter the distance between
always here with me you will be
If only I will but closely look
you there I will surely see

For the quiet of the night
when I look up to a star
I feel your presence in them nearby
for near me you always are

In the sunset I see
with colors vibrant across the sky
Within I can see our love
with such beauty with joy I cry

Or when a gentle wind blows by
and brushes against the trees
Right there I seem to hear your voice
in soft whispers of a breeze

Yes, no matter the distance between
always here with me you will be
If only I will but closely look
you there I will surely see
~>o<~


Revisted....because I needed to.....




[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-11-2003 01:35 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-09-26 03:28 AM


Your inner space is so lovely and poetic... Truly it is.

~ You are destined to be together forever,
Linda

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2 posted 2003-09-26 03:28 AM


Oh Ethel, what a magnificent and very beautiful poem of love. I understand these feelings so well, and have felt them also. I wish for the two of you to be able to share together very soon...in the meantime, I much appreciate your wonderful writings...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

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3 posted 2003-09-26 03:31 AM



"Or when a gentle wind blows by
and brushes against the trees
Right there I seem to hear your voice
in soft whispers of a breeze"


Absolutely beautiful, Ethel.  Each of your
writes is more lovely than the one before.

Love and hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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4 posted 2003-09-26 03:33 AM


terrific penning,, lady poetess

                                                       

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5 posted 2003-09-26 03:52 AM


This is wonderful and the penning as beautiful as your heart.
Crystal

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6 posted 2003-09-26 05:08 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, and your inner-space is soooooo gorgeous and beautiful and soon will be filled with the ceremony of true love forever, yay! (kiss on cheek) You and Gary are both very special and soon will be together forever and the space will then forever be shared, God Bless You, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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7 posted 2003-09-26 05:37 AM





Hi Ethel, I hope all is well!
I had been away for awhile
And it is taking me some time
to say hi to everyone.

I’ve sure missed your poetry!

This inner space that you write of
is what a poet would call, a heart of gold!

I’m glad for you and your loved ones
that you have one.

And, I’m glad that we too, are fortunate
enough to be blessed by it too!

You Take Great Care!
And I’ll talk to you soon,

Richy



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8 posted 2003-09-26 08:50 AM


Great as always
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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9 posted 2003-09-26 09:14 AM


Ethel, this is such a beautiful love poem.
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10 posted 2003-09-26 09:16 AM


Beautiful as always Ethel...
and I love the pic!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

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11 posted 2003-10-02 09:18 AM


Yes....I think the inner space, the shape of our very selves that we call spirit, is made for that. When our spirit bonds with another's in love, that space is filled, and permanently if we let it be. Even if the bond is ripped apart by life or circumstance, our shape, our person, is never the same from that bonding moment onward.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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12 posted 2003-10-02 10:27 AM


This has such a beautiful flow to it.
Great job!
Eric

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13 posted 2003-10-02 01:35 PM



Sometimes those inner spaces
reach out so very, very far...

beautiful, Ethel...

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14 posted 2003-10-02 08:17 PM


Ethel - yessss exactly!
to be able to close your eyes
and feel that presence is a gift in
itself, as are your words
(btw I adore that picture, have
had it for a long time and made a
graphic of it a while back - will
send along k?)
xxoo

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15 posted 2003-10-02 08:44 PM


you are indeed so lovely.....as these inner thoughts are too....beautiful and I found it somewhat peaceful.....HUGSSS


Lauren~

The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you

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16 posted 2003-10-02 09:09 PM


Love it garysgirl
Very sweet
:-)

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17 posted 2003-10-03 06:34 PM


enjoyed
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18 posted 2003-10-10 07:19 AM


I remember this one...one of my favourites of yours. 'inner space' just speaks volumes on its own!

beautiful!

p.s~ I have missed you to E.M. I've been busy with college, hope you and gary are well?


and


gem
xxxx

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19 posted 2003-10-10 07:49 AM


The most recent theory of the universe is that it is actually not infinite; the space inside each of us, however, really is.

Nice write!  Thank you for sharing it.

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20 posted 2003-10-10 04:13 PM


Linda,
Sunny
Vicky
Glenn
Crystal
Noah
Ricky
Bernie
Sue
Nancy Lee
Ed
Eric
Karilea
Sue
Lauren
Froggy
Vandana
Gemma
Iceman

Everyone, I am so sorry that I didn't notice that I hadn't thanked you all for your replies. I really do thank each of you and appreciate each and every one of you so much. You are all so sweet and nice. It really is good to be back, isn't it?
Heart hugs to all of you,  
Ethel

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21 posted 2003-10-10 05:47 PM


this is wonderful Ethel mae

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22 posted 2003-10-10 08:40 PM


Thank you, Liz. I'm glad
that you like it.
Hugs, little friend  
Ethel

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23 posted 2003-10-10 09:05 PM


You sneaky thing Ethel . . .
*smile*
thank you for using it
I am honored you like it
A heavenly picture
too good to me . . .
too good
LittleOne
xxoo

garysgirl
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24 posted 2003-10-10 10:50 PM


LOL, Sue. I did sneak that one in there, didn't I? I thought that you made it look so much better, that I wanted to others to see it.
Thank you for fixing it. I appreciate you, Little One.
Heart hugs,  
Ethel

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