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Shadow Dance |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Shadow Dance  Fall is scratching at the windows Calling me out to see Fingers in reach of sky, in hope That I know, eternity… It calls at me to look beyond The daily scope of we While shadows dance in glorious Escape of you, and me. I do not write this just for me, No, I write it for you, and you… For isn’t that what poets say? Or just what poets...do? |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
I do not write this just for me, No, I write it for you, and you… For isn’t that what poets say? Or just what poets...do? my dear your penned words tell it all,, fabulous,,, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"It calls at me to look beyond The daily scope of we While shadows dance in glorious Escape of you, and me." Smiling at the way you seem to say just what I need to hear sometimes Kari. Thanks  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write Karilea... and I do believe we poets write for others as well as for ourselves. ~Hugs~
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Yup, we sure do...wonderfully said Sunshinygirl  Maree  fate is not just |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your words dance for your readers in both the shadows and the sunlight...   EA |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You always know just what to share. Crystal |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Poetry comes from the Latin word "poesia" meaning "to create" and thus I couldn't agree with you more as we create for ourselves AND others! (smiles) If poets didn't create for one another, then there certainly would be no troubadours or storytellers or music, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"It calls at me to look beyond The daily scope of we While shadows dance in glorious Escape of you, and me." This is beautiful, Karilea... When the power of love overcomes the |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lovely Karilea, just lovely. Morning hugs lady. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Karilea...The pleasure is in sharing and I thank you for sharing this dance with us. Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (09-30-2003 10:23 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
shadows dance in many ways to many tunes... yours seems to have the lilt of an Irish lullaby... and ot be filled with hope. nicely done K |
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