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"Hi, I'm sorry"
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"Hi, I'm sorry" |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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"Hi, I'm sorry," says the little note. So friendly and genuine, I like that, maybe the most sincere words anybody has said to me today. But it continues, says it couldn't deliver my last email. Machine remorse, but it did say "Hi..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling. Methinks machine remorse is okay when it comes from MACHINES. Your poetry always has a way of making me turn things over in my mind and look at things differently. I like that in a poet.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ratleader Well something is better then nothing. LOL Enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I love the way you think! Excellent write. ~Hugs~
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ed~ You been reading my mail ? The last two I've sent you have come back, UNDELIVERABLE~ Hello, I'm sorry too~  Honest Injun ! *Huglets* ~*Me ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...This made me smile...thanks for that!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"System Administrator..." never says Hi... I like your machine! I like your mind! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yours is much more polite than mine... It was acting as though it had never heard of Marsha... and was questioning my sanity at the continued attempts! LOL I like this touch of sad whimsy very much, my friend... I'm glad it showed remorse... wish you'd been shown more sincerity. *S* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Ed, I too can't stand technology ever so much, though I do use he Internet just so I can be with you and all of my Passions friends here! (sigh) I understand this technical error, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ed, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Machines are such a lovely thing,ehh. Crystal |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
PC not working virus crash on my hard disk paper saving mind |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
And so it goes... we'll continue to reasearch of bigger and better products while the humanity acquired over an x amount of generations goes where? Good to read this ecrivan |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
One thing for sure you have to admit that cyber machine sure is polite. If a human received your mail and did not recognize they'd report you as spam and have you kicked off the internet.See machines are more polite.LOL See Ya Bon-Bon  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This was cute, I like the touch of wistfulness at the end, and I like your syllable structure. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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