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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-09-25 08:17 PM



Ether Zones


“There’s a fine line between being smart
and being brilliant. Today, you come up
with a creative idea that secures your
genius….”

Or so said
the horrorscope…

Wrote a horoscope homily some years
ago…it didn’t push me as hard, then,

as now

now…

it keeps hinting at…more

like pushy friends
who have your life figured out

if only

one would DO…
all that is applied to their sensitivities…

but we can only
pick ourselves UP
so many times, brush OFF
the crumbs of the day

I think…
perhaps…

my horoscope is taking in
my hoptimist attitude…

dang it.

I wonder what genius
I performed
today.



© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-09-25 08:22 PM


I think this is genious. you have such a way with words

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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2 posted 2003-09-25 08:23 PM


"I think…
perhaps…

my horoscope is taking in
my hoptimist attitude…

dang it.

I wonder what genius
I performed
today."

I understand where you're coming from Karilea.
Love the word I just learned "hoptimist".
Excellent write m'friend.
~Hugs~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-09-25 09:08 PM


cute..only because I know those feelings and I know those feelings of friends that push...as if they know how my life truly is...I don't read horoscopes though.

hugs
M

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4 posted 2003-09-25 09:27 PM


Wonderful write to ponder this evening. hugs to you dear lady. Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

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5 posted 2003-09-25 09:30 PM




(sigh) Looking over my year horoscope for all of 2003, I absolutely find it to be a "horrorscope"! (smiles) Time to crawl out of the zone and climb into the otherside, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

QjQ
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6 posted 2003-09-25 10:33 PM


enjoyed this penning,,,

                                                       

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7 posted 2003-09-25 10:41 PM


as a lovely poetess once said, "please please let him do it again"

So I say "please please let Sunshinygirl do this gain"





Maree.

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


angelblueyes
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8 posted 2003-09-25 11:02 PM


The genius is in your heart and soul.
Crystal

Patricia
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9 posted 2003-09-26 06:29 AM


Genius, like beauty, is in the eye of the beholder.  I find it in your words, Karilea...beauty and genius- an incomparable duo.

Hugs,
Patricia

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10 posted 2003-09-26 07:05 AM


sunshine, you are not only brilliant, but have a very dear and sensitive heart....every poem of yours I have read is astounding.  This is genius, and don't allow anyone to live your life for you...I say, be happy and make Sunshine happy, you are an elegant woman of high esteem, it shows in your poems.  Thank you always for sharing your heart, light and songs.  
ethome
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11 posted 2003-09-26 07:08 AM


You just performed it!

Lovely angles of perception!

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

dingusjr
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12 posted 2003-09-26 07:10 AM


I am constantly picking myself up and crumbing off!  Good to know others are too.
Thanks for the reminder.
Larry

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