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KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-09-25 01:45 PM




Today I woke and laid in bed
Watched cartoons made for itty-bitties...
Looked in the mirror and noticed that
My roots were coming in full force.

Looked down and saw I'm nearly out
Of cigerrettes, long out of money
My little toes were blue with chill...
No wonder, sticking out the blanket all night like that...

My room too messy to stand much longer
"Later...I will clean it later"...
Stepping out into the hall
To find the rest the house a mess.

Flowers wilted across the table
Dried petals that the cat tried to devour
Spilled milk from someone awake before me
And left it there for me to clean.

Mis-flicked ashes around the ashtray
Empty soda bottles from who-knows-when
Crumpled papers strewn across the floor
And a candle left to drip all over...

Yet there was a feeling reaching out from in me
And it was then I remembered that last night
I went to bed upon inspiration
Let it stir until this morning.....

I'll write a little bitty first
And then I'll clean this horrid mess!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-09-25 01:47 PM



Oh shoot Lauren...go back to bed.
It'll still be there tomorrow...

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow
2 posted 2003-09-25 01:52 PM


lol! Wish I could
Thanks Sunshine

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2003-09-25 02:01 PM


(smiling).. perhaps the inspire... should have its attend, and then..only then.. the world let in



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