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wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2003-09-25 10:24 AM



Baptize me Baby
in your river of wanting
and tell me my name

Lover, annoint me
with your most holy water
and reclaim my soul

"In looking Northward, I see a light"


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-09-25 10:27 AM




Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2003-09-25 10:42 AM




seems the clouds of last fall have lifted for this one...

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-09-25 10:45 AM


WOW....Beautiful.......sooooo captivating!!! Love it!!!!!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

James_A_Fraser
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4 posted 2003-09-25 10:47 AM


Yer a happy man, wranx -- that's easy to decipher!

And one fine writer.


PouringJewels
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Maryland
5 posted 2003-09-25 10:54 AM


It seems you have found your world. Good for you. I wrote a new one after work, but it is way down the list come this morning.You will never guess who came to see just me at work.
Martie
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6 posted 2003-09-25 11:12 AM


Smiling with you, Ed!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2003-09-25 11:18 AM


Love looks good on ya!

~Hugs~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-09-25 11:23 AM


Ed, isn't love great? It's looking good on
you, my friend. You're glowing!!
Hugs  
Ethel

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
9 posted 2003-09-25 11:26 AM



Oh my...

Smiling HUGE at you, Ed...

Love this...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2003-09-25 11:43 AM


wranx


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11 posted 2003-09-25 12:49 PM


Not sure an old lady like me can take this heat but I like it!
littlewing
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12 posted 2003-09-25 02:51 PM


Before my altar
bow on bended knee in prayer
raise chalice to mouth

One single rose, red
place upon my lips, my love
your soul, I whisper

Dark Angel
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13 posted 2003-09-25 04:31 PM


Very beautiful Ed

and yours too littleone

to you both

M

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
14 posted 2003-09-25 04:44 PM


Damn, you're good at this..
Margherita
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Eternity
15 posted 2003-09-25 05:52 PM


Exquisite!
Sue's too. Just a pleasure to read you both these times!
Love, Margherita

vlraynes
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16 posted 2003-09-26 03:06 AM



Okay...we'll just pretend I didn't do that...pretty please?

But?...you two ARE poetry...smile.

Love ya both...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-26-2003 03:19 AM).]

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2003-09-26 03:09 AM


I thought that was supposed to be a post by Wranx?


EA

angelblueyes
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18 posted 2003-09-26 03:09 AM


The heat in this is wonderful.
Crystal

vlraynes
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19 posted 2003-09-26 03:10 AM



And?...this and Sue's reply SHOULD be posted
together in it's own thread.

Smiling here...you two are beautiful.


When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-26-2003 03:22 AM).]

passing shadows
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displaced
20 posted 2003-09-26 03:19 AM


sweet
Gentle Spirit
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21 posted 2003-09-26 11:35 AM


Excellent Ed....so few words...
so much said.  very excellent....
it sizzles...

Corinne
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state of confusion
22 posted 2003-09-26 12:41 PM


Whoa! This is mighty spicy stuff so early in the mornin'!



She's a lucky lady!


Corinne

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in the shadows
23 posted 2003-09-26 06:38 PM


Oh Man, she never even called me by my name!


Kethry
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24 posted 2003-09-26 07:44 PM


Do you think you could bottle some of that river and send it my way?
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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