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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-25 09:53 AM



Winter

I saw the glimmering diamonds
rippling in the snow bed
before it had held flowers
such warmth it had spread
underneath the iced glass
is kept a secret of perfume
with a tender white of dusting
until it can resume
now I too have had enough
of wilting this cold day
and shall lie and sleep with it
snowing a liquid crystal way

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2003-09-25 09:55 AM


oh to lie and sleep with winter, and awaken to a spring day and new life.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-09-25 11:08 AM


Beautiful, and tranquil...I feel sleepy now...zzzzz...lovely!!

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

vandana
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3 posted 2003-09-25 11:08 AM


enjoyed
gemjop
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4 posted 2003-09-25 04:23 PM


HOW beautiful is this????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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5 posted 2003-10-02 09:46 AM


I -- well, I adore this little poem. So much in it, just below that shimmering surface.

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