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Your Hurt In His Hand
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Your Hurt In His Hand |
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Ku'uipo Junior Member
since 2003-09-25
Posts 42 |
Listen to the silence Hear it tread on steady waters A tear is not heard until it screams Laughter unnoticed, a smile forlorn A stream of pain is held too long The face of a woman deceives the day The cry of a woman impermiates the night Hanging hearts can bleed eternal The hope it hides can die today Embrace the truth Prolong no anguish Seek the faith of a coming day Softly touch and gently speak A kind word returns as rage A tender kiss can be forgotten Take hold the hand of diligence lost Wipe away the glance of lonely dismay Watch them fall Feel them burn See as he holds your hurt in his hand Copyright ©2003 |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"A tear is not heard until it screams" One amazing line of many! Welcome to PIP!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ku'uipo~ Welcome to Passions~  You have many lovely thoughts in this entrance poem~ Makes for a tender read~ Enjoy your stay in this circle of poetic friendship~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Very wise and deep poem. Welcome to Passions I hope you stay awhile. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
All I can think to say to this is...siiigh... Welcome to passions. Hope you find that you like it here! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very good first post....makes the reader think, which is good. I hopr that you like it here at Passions In poetry. and, welcome!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hanging hearts can bleed eternal The hope it hides can die today Embrace the truth Prolong no anguish Seek the faith of a coming day absolutely beautiful! I loved this. squeeze: |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (big hugggssssss) This is such an honest and heartfelt debut, sweet friend, your heart pours out with love and compassion here that mends and heals the wounds, yay, they say a spoonful of sugar helps the medicine go down and your heart has given us all a daily dose, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your fantastic poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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