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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-25 08:05 AM


Shall I?

shall I rest
within your arms
in the warmth
of tender skin
as you hold
yourself open
to let me in


"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-09-25 08:19 AM


Well done, m'lady.
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-09-25 08:44 AM


OneSlick~
Such a lovely invite~
Morning *huglets* lady~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2003-09-25 08:51 AM


very nice thought
M

littlewing
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4 posted 2003-09-25 09:03 AM


Oh Helen . . .
I adore this
this is a lullaby
beautiful
xxoo

Susan Caldwell
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-09-25 09:05 AM


Oooh so lovely!


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

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7 posted 2003-09-25 09:16 AM


Yes.....do.

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vandana
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8 posted 2003-09-25 09:42 AM


nice
SharaRose
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9 posted 2003-09-25 09:47 AM


Very nice!

SharaRose @-->--

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10 posted 2003-09-25 01:38 PM


Sounds like a plan to me! *S*

I like this very much. *S*

alisa
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11 posted 2003-09-28 12:07 PM


great one...
James_A_Fraser
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12 posted 2003-09-28 01:14 AM


You can imagine more than one answer to this question?

I can't.



~~J

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