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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-09-25 05:53 AM


Early Morning Thoughts


Coming home to the deafening silence pains me
into that hopelessness, that permeates the air
when calm is too calm, and the absence
does make the heart grow fonder.

To never say good-bye, to never give it ending,
as I sit here supported by my thoughts, influenced
by the movies of my past, those films breaking at times,
the cracks and tears evidenced, and the black and white
giving more expression, than a colored world ever could.

A new keyboard to close those gaps and to open
"thoserunonwords" censors the real behind my handiwork
and I bring those inner thoughts to the surface,
let them rise slowly like smoke signals...
until the genie in my clouds offers me wishes
and I take them in hoping that just one may be granted.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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vlraynes
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1 posted 2003-09-25 06:01 AM



"Coming home to the deafening silence pains me
into that hopelessness, that permeates the air
when calm is too calm, and the absence
does make the heart grow fonder.

To never say good-bye, to never give it ending,
as I sit here supported by my thoughts, influenced
by the movies of my past, those films breaking at times,
the cracks and tears evidenced, and the black and white
giving more expression, than a colored world ever could."


Feeling this right along with you, Maureen.
You've described it perfectly.

May all your wishes be granted, my friend.
Love and hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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2 posted 2003-09-25 08:07 AM


and I take them in hoping that just one may be granted.


may your wishes indeed be granted my friend..

QjQ
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3 posted 2003-09-25 08:44 AM


very well expressed,,,

                                                       

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4 posted 2003-09-25 08:48 AM


SweetWynter~
T'would seem that you had a pensive night, my friend~

This aches gal ...~
Beautifully so ...~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2003-09-25 08:48 AM


Yesterday I tried to take a day out for myself and along the way there was a beautiful cloud lifting up into the bluest sky...forming the smoke that a Genie would appear from, if there was such a thing...it lasted quite awhile.

Thank you Vicky, Ron and Glenn

M

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-09-25 08:50 AM


every night is pensive, every day is tiring
and I am trying to figure out what to do with myself to be able to lift up each morning...
thank you Marge
hugs
M

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2003-09-25 09:06 AM


"until the genie in my clouds offers me wishes
and I take them in hoping that just one may be granted."


I wish the same..for us all.



littlewing
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8 posted 2003-09-25 09:34 AM


Maureen:

that silence is bittersweet
welcomed, yet lonely
and may your wish be gifted
to you , through this
*smile*
xxoo

vandana
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9 posted 2003-09-25 09:40 AM


enjoyed the words
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