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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-09-25 03:44 AM




why do
you
keep acting
it
was you
that
lost the
lines
the scene is
over


                                                           

[This message has been edited by QjQ (09-25-2003 07:43 AM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-09-25 03:51 AM


and the curtain closed
Kaoru
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2 posted 2003-09-25 04:15 AM


Gah, this is REALLY good! Library.
vlraynes
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3 posted 2003-09-25 05:44 AM



Excellent, Glenn!  Love this one...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Mystic One
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4 posted 2003-09-25 08:47 AM


Yes Nice
Insomniac Cat
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5 posted 2003-09-25 12:04 PM


Sweet! So much is said in so few words!
Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2003-09-25 12:35 PM


That is short, and wry, and I love the way you did it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

gemjop
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7 posted 2003-09-25 04:21 PM




into my library too

Instant karma's gonna get you.

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-09-25 04:23 PM


Glenn, I'm really liking your thoughts you're putting into poems. This is really good, and I'm keeping it, too.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-09-25 04:34 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Glenn, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, it ain't over till its over, but the fact is, its over so the stage must be cleared! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Glenn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

scorpio
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right...there
10 posted 2003-09-25 04:39 PM


Simply profound, Glenn..

believe in what your heart feels...

Kethry
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11 posted 2003-09-25 05:12 PM


if the play is over, why was there no encore?
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Margherita
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12 posted 2003-09-25 05:57 PM


This is a very good one, indeed!
Love, Margherita

ThisDiamond
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13 posted 2003-09-25 06:02 PM


Q...
What a pointed little arrow...
Right to the heart of the matter.
One of my favorite pieces of yours. TD

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-09-25 06:06 PM


---Scene is over, curtain drops. The End.


EA

JilGirl
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15 posted 2003-09-26 01:05 AM


Golly, I thought THAT was just
the rehearsal! Now, it's OVER???

GOLLY!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

angelblueyes
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16 posted 2003-09-26 01:15 AM


And that's the end.yep yep.
Crystal

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