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Aenimal
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0 posted 09-25-2003 12:59 AM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aenimal

she speaks in riddles
i in tongues, words adrift in
wind as fallen leaves

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (09-25-2003 01:03 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 raphael giuffrida - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...


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Ah yes...I like this, Raph...very much.

Hugs to you, my friend...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Kaoru
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2 posted 09-25-2003 01:05 AM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

You're so good at these little short one's.. I wish I were holding that talent as well.

But I think I'll let you keep it, for now.
Jason Lyle
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They all speak in riddles Raph.

cool write.

Jason
Aenimal
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thanks and hugs vickie

Meg your talent surpasses mine

Jason. Amen grin
Margherita
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Eternity


5 posted 09-25-2003 06:13 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Nothing like interpreting the wind's whispers ...
That's what I get.
Poeta dall'animo passionale e dalla mente acuta, ti mando un abbraccio.
Margherita
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6 posted 09-25-2003 07:38 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Raph, now don't go tellin people
about the convos we used to have
(sorry couldnt help it)

Jason!  not all of them do . . .

But Oh this is soo true
nice and tight Raph
(nice metaphors)
beautiful execution
*smile*
xxoo
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7 posted 09-25-2003 08:19 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

nicely done Raph.. these short forms seem to suit you well of late... the distilling of an idea or emotion into a few lines that the reader can enjoy..is not as easy as some might think...you seem to have a knack for doing it well..
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Aenimal
Good one, enjoyed.
vandana
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enjoyed
Kethry
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10 posted 09-25-2003 10:04 AM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

No communication breakdown here.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~


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Ahem...hmm...scratching head...did anyone hear that? hehe Just kidding. WOW this is good for getting the point across that's  for sure. I heard that in the quiet when there was no rustling of the leaves... I know what you are talking about, and this is sad when 2 can't seem to communicate. Very sad indeed.
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

gemjop
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what about a new one.... obsenities and draughts

she plays with skill
he cheats with no shame, verbal abuse adrift in draught(clever eh?)like kings and queens

so whos talking riddles to ya boi? whoever she is I commend her.

in all seriousness, loved the soft drift of teasing love/hate feelings i get from this.

if that made no sense...forget it....cos i'm tiredddddd

I just had fish and chips!

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Brad Majors
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13 posted 09-26-2003 04:49 PM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad Majors

Awesome as always
Aenimal
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Thanks Brad!
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Thank you for this one, Raph....I needed it this very morning.

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yeah Raph...and who would l#ve this more than me?

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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(big hugggsssssss) Oh Raphael, your words truly do speak with gales of heart, sweet friend, autumn is full of riddles and yet it seems so easy to concentrate and study them! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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18 posted 10-03-2003 10:22 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

we can do that ya know.....LOL always....you are most enjoyable to read....


Lauren~

There's a song inside  my soul
One that I've tried to write over and over again

A Romantic Heart
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Awesome , when in love, we speak a language of our own!



~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~
Aenimal
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thanks everybody
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nice
Dark Angel
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22 posted 10-07-2003 08:54 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Beautiful Sir Raph.

Keeping this.

M

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

inkedgoddess
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23 posted 10-07-2003 11:27 PM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

those leaves again,
they are quite the catalyst arent they?
nice, short, and hittinghome
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24 posted 10-07-2003 11:32 PM       View Profile for allamericanjoe   Email allamericanjoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for allamericanjoe

very insightful.  I like mucho.
 
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