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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-09-25 12:39 PM



You Never Said Goodbye

Remembering yesterdays
Yet I know they have gone
I hold them dear to my heart
All the memories live on

Only wish things could be
Alike the yesterdays past
Why is it those good times
Never ever seem to last

Held for memory keeping
Archived from yesteryears
Often I write how I miss you
My eyes filling with tears

All those moments collect
Once again I began to cry
Always hoped of your return
As you never said goodbye


HopeĀ©2003

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-09-25 12:50 PM


This aches, and is also well penned. I'm moved, deeply.
QjQ
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2 posted 2003-09-25 01:15 AM


your feelings expressed well,,

this kind of reminds me of being loved and not given a kiss,,,

                                                       

HopeS
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3 posted 2003-09-25 01:20 AM


Thank you Kaoru for your equally touching reply
Hope

HopeS
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4 posted 2003-09-25 01:22 AM


thank you QjQ , yes very similar as being loved and not kissed ,he is someone I have missed ,  someone I shall never forget although we have never met
Hope

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5 posted 2003-09-25 01:38 AM




come'ere and lemme hug ya

HopeS
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6 posted 2003-09-25 01:46 AM


hey thanks Dixie , you know hugs across miles do bring me smiles

Hope

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7 posted 2003-09-25 07:19 AM


They never say good-bye because most are cowards. Going through this myself right now. You couldn't have worded more perfectly
HopeS
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8 posted 2003-09-25 07:38 AM


Thank you Pouring Jewels , yes I agree some are quite gutless .... I actually wrote a poem titled " The Cowards Way Out " it is in the Archive 26 dated 4/29/03

Hope

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9 posted 2003-09-25 08:32 AM


Hope~
My friend, you do write such lovely touching pieces~

AND, what's this AGAIN ... I see you in my mailbox -

From LovingYou.com
LOVE POEM OF THE DAY FOR 9/24/03
-----------------------------
An Open Book I Maintain
by Hope

(and I won't post the content of your poem)
BUT ... as always .... It's gorgeous !
CONGRATULATIONS !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

HopeS
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10 posted 2003-09-25 08:43 AM


Thanks Marge for your kind reply and those special Marge "huglets " and yes another nice surprise being voted "Poem of the day ' once again

Hope

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11 posted 2003-09-25 08:43 AM


I see from Marge that you still post at lovingyou.com and continue to make their
admired list...I remember those days.

Meeting in real sometimes makes those
"never saying goodbyes" even harder.

hugs
Maureen

HopeS
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12 posted 2003-09-25 08:58 AM


Thanks Maureen , yes still go to LovingYou.com 6 years later and yes I do remember those times , hey its still the same guy that brings out these emotional rhymes

Hope

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13 posted 2003-09-25 09:36 AM


Painful. Thank you for sharing this.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Kethry
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14 posted 2003-09-25 04:20 PM


And sometimes you never can... I loved the way you wxpress this Hope.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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15 posted 2003-09-25 04:28 PM


All those moments collect
Once again I began to cry
Always hoped of your return
As you never said goodbye


Hope, this is beautiful. You can write sad love poems better than anyone I've ever read. Even though sad, they are always beautiful.
Hugs  
Ethel

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