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Brigid WillowKeeper
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since 2003-08-24
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0 posted 2003-09-24 10:29 PM



I wander through the dead decaying meadow.
I plant seeds of hope.
I pray the grey goes away and you come back.
Though you are here, you may aswell not be.
All I can do is wait.
Wait for the clouds to disapperate,
and smile once again.

I wander through a green and fragrant meadow.
No longer do I plant seeds of hope
rather than seeds of life.
I pray the green will stay and you stay too.
Now you once again feel love as I have always loved you.
Day by day the green gets richer and I smile once again.

You are my sister, and my best friend.

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-24 10:31 PM


very nicely penned write,, your feelings well expressed,,,

                                                       

angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-09-24 10:33 PM


This is beautiful and sincere in heart.
Crystal

Brigid WillowKeeper
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3 posted 2003-09-25 10:06 PM


Thank you so much! Really, I do not have an insane sister (well that can be debated LOL) nor do I have a good relationship with her. This was inspired by a prose I read.
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