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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-09-24 07:37 PM


Love Song

I want to be with you.    (he)
I want to be with you too.   (she)
My heart is yours.          (he)
My heart yearns for you.      (she)
I'm reaching out to touch you.  (he)
Please do.  (she)

JamesLee
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2003

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1 posted 2003-09-24 07:46 PM


how very nice i enjoyed this write very much,,,

                                                       

angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-09-24 10:01 PM


This is lovely and sweet.
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3 posted 2003-09-24 11:46 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is such a cute duet, sweet friend, so who's that she sharing the microphone with you? (big hugggssssss) I wish for true love to always fill your heart and sing alongside you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

the_loner_23
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4 posted 2003-09-24 11:48 PM


This is a very beautiful poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
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5 posted 2003-09-24 11:52 PM


I agree. This is awesome.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Margherita
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6 posted 2003-09-25 03:57 AM


No one can wish for more! The dream of all the yearning hearts!
Lovely!
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-08-07 02:45 AM


Thank you so much...this song takes two...James
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