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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-09-24 07:30 PM


Perfectly

Not sure why you wear your
skirts so short and tight
but it's a sight to see.
Not sure why your blouses
hug your curves just right
and fit so perfectly.
Oh Bebe, you're so
sexy and I like what
you do to me.
Don't know how you do it
but you do it perfectly.

JamesLee
Septmeber22
2003


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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-24 07:48 PM


perfection is nice,,,,,

enjoyed the read,,,

                                                       

angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-09-24 09:55 PM


I'm sure there's lots she loves about you too
Crystal

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3 posted 2003-09-24 11:50 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo adorable, sweet friend, and may you continue to be mesmerized and spellbinded by the beauty of true love! (big hugggssssss) This is "perfect" romantic poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

the_loner_23
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4 posted 2003-09-24 11:52 PM


Awesome write. I liked the descriptions.

Cold hands means a warm heart

LiquidMidnight
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5 posted 2003-09-24 11:57 PM


I really liked this piece. It really describes how my imagination likes to run when I see a girl dressed to impress.
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-09-26 06:04 PM


Thank you QJQ, Angel, Noah, the loner and Liquid for the nice responses...James
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