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vandana
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0 posted 2003-09-24 07:28 PM



If tomorrow won't come
What are you going to do?
Will you leave
and break my heart
What will you do
If you find yourself alone
And when noone is here with you
What are you going to do
Will you be leaving tonight?
And there will be no love
for me tomorrow
If tomorrow won't come
Will you take a moment
and spent a night with me
I know
Tomorrow is yet far
And you want to break up
with me
If tomorrow won't comr
What are you going to do?
Will you still stay with me?
If tomorrow won't come
Will you leave?
Will you take me with you
Will you make me yours
If tomorrow won't come
What are you going to do
Will you cry on my shoulders
If tomorrow won't come
What will you do?


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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-24 07:49 PM


expressed very well,,,,

                                                       

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2 posted 2003-09-24 08:55 PM


Vandana, in this age and time of insecurity, this is a very good poem.  Who knows if tomorrow will, indeed, be here? We go on faith.

We pray that when we go to sleep, we will wake up to a new tomorrow.

We plan that if there is a tomorrow, there is a whole LIST of things that will need to be done.

Sometimes, on that list, we forget to say "thank you" to the people we love.  For loving us.

Thank you, Vandana, for this poem.

angelblueyes
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3 posted 2003-09-24 09:43 PM


These are very legitimate questions, but don't spend your days wondering.Find your answers and move forward, for you deserve such happiness in life.
Crystal

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4 posted 2003-09-24 11:23 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Vandana, this sounds sad, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way and encourage you to ignore the questions and simply go out there and believe love will always remain at your side! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel comfort hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Tim
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5 posted 2003-09-24 11:35 PM


nicely written Vandana, enjoyed.
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6 posted 2003-09-25 03:56 AM


life is full of questions, yes

and sometimes we never get the answers

well done!

PouringJewels
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7 posted 2003-09-25 04:33 AM


tOMARROW IS ANOTHER DAY GET THROUGH THIS DAY FIRST BELIEVE IN YOURSELF
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8 posted 2003-09-25 10:52 AM


Vandana, this is a very good poem, and
I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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